Sibling Rivalry (closed)

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this is a story for Asa and myself, an already thouht out plot from another thread that didn't work. We decided to make our own to continue everything.

This will start with a little bit of backstory, and then we'll begin. Asa, whenever you are ready.
 
~Ellena~

*She had finished Track for the day and had already dealt with getting cleaned up to go to her dads office. After learning that her twisted step brother was also involved in track now had really unnerved her and him actually trying to fondle her in broad daylight had totally messed her mind up. SHe knew he was sick and that he was intent on her but that was insane even for him.*

*Her dad and his mom had been married for only a few months now and it seemed he was growing more intent in his interest in her. But at least she had her own car and could get away from him that way he rarely followed her to her dads office so that gave her some peace from him and she had started locking her bedroom door any time she was in there as well.*

*alking from the School she made her way to her car. Dressed in a soft knit dress, black of course with a silver necklace and scarf heels of black suede and silver trim with her hair pulled back in a briad. She tossed her books in the trunk moving to get in the car she saw it... her tire was flat. On closer examination it had slashed... bad. SHe didn't have to guess by who she could hear him walking over*
 
He drove up like a knight in shining armor, ready and willing to take his little sister whevever she needed to go. A small smirk on his face, that pained with confusion when he looked down to see the tire. He didn't waver, or guess at what the problem was, just looked and saw the tire.
"That's a shame. Damned hooligans. Out here all the time, aren't they? Looks like your stranded..."
He gave another smile, as most of the other track people had already left for the day. She had been one of the last people out of the locker, as usual. He used the little tid bit to his advantage. She could either hitch a ride, which was dangerous, or take her big brother up on an offer.
"Hop in," He said, opening the passenger door, "I'll give you a lift. What are big brothers for."
With that, he let out a laugh, revving the engine. What were big brothers for?
 
~Ellena~

*Her dad would never forgive her if she hitched a ride and it was too far to walk cursing under her breath she reluctantly got in the car arms crossed over her chest* Yeah thanks just drop me off at Dads office Okay
 
"That's not a problem at all," Jared drove off. He eased the car, a hunk of shit his father had left him before the divorce, into the street, making his way out of town.
He took the right streets, going down to her father's office, but didn't stop. He just passed it by, moving the car at the same speed along the way.
"Hmmm, I guess that was your stop," He didn't take his eyes off the road, driving on. As soon as he took a right at the next light, the urban city gave way to more rural houses.
"Would you like to go for a drive? Just a short one. I'll take you to your dad's in a few minutes. I just want to show you something."
They continued to move away from the city, away from people, farmhouses becoming little dots on the horizon.
"No one around," He mused.
 
~Ellena~

*Glaring at him*

Jared turn this car around RIGHT NOW and take me back to Dads office
 
"In a minute, Ellen... jeez keep your panties on."
Jared laughed a little, "Or don't. I don't care."
He stopped the car just at the edge of a meadow. Tall trees, nearly blocking out the perfect day laid their shadows over the area, and gave a nice quiet feel just as soon as he turned the engine off.
"I just want to talk about what happened earlier today. As soon as we get our stories straight, and everything taken care of, I'll tkae you back to your Dad's."
Jared got out of the car, holding up the keys as if they were a prize waiting for her to win.
"It's your choice. We can talk for five minutes, and I'll take you back. Or you can walk for an hour..."
 
~Ellena~

What story Jared you were trying to fondle my breasts during track. Pretty straight forward and SICK THer eend of the conversation now take me to dads or I WILL Walk

*Opens the car door to prove that she was serious*
 
She began to get out of the carm threatening to leave him. He felt so excited from this situation. Having her, alone out here in the middle of nowhere. They could do anything.
Anything.
He was rock hard.
Jared walked over to her, pushing her against the side of his car, pinning her between himself and the car. His hard cock pressed against one of her thighs.
"I just wanna talk, that's all," He said through gritted teeth, pushing her even harder as if to emphasize it, "Why do you have to be this snotty uptight bitch all the time? Why can't we just talk?"
He let go of her, partly because he was scared of what he might do, but even more so because he felt so turned on that close to her. He could smell the sweet aftershower glow coming off her body.
It drove him wild.
 
~Ellena~

You have 5 minutes.... Back off and start talking and you lay one finger on me... Dad will know EVERYTHING. Got it
 
Jared raised his hands, as if this compromise had come willingly between them. He nodded, accepting. She had a right to go to her father, but he had a right to talk to her.
It was only fair.
"Every since our parents got married, even before that, I had this crush on you. I really liked you Ellena. I know I don't have the greatest way of showing it, but I do, and I'd like it if we became closer. You know, as more than just brother and sister. We're not blood related, and you are so hot. I grabbed at you earlier today cause I couldn't help myself."
Jared, with a flashy smile and a cool suave voice moved aside her on the car, staring into her eyes.
"I can never help myself when I'm around you," a finger traced lightly over her shoulder.
 
~Kayli~

*She pushed his hand away and walked a few steps away. A growl to her words*


I said talk NOT touch Got it and that no matter what is just sick we may not be blood but we are still brother and sister and that is just sick Jared Leave me alone!!!!
 
"You see," Jared pointed at her as she walked away, "That is just what I'm talking about. I can never talk to you. You are always putting up this bitch front and will never let anyone in."
Walking up to her, he tried reason, but it was his own blind reason to fuck her, and make that pretty little body of hers his own.
"Let me in, sis. I want to know what's really going on with you. I want to love you, to hold you. I want to share everything with you, and in turn let you know everything about me."
He grabbed for her.
 
~Ellena~

*Getting grabbed she tensed a little he scared her just enough and with him bringing her all the way out awayo fromall civilization there was no telling what ever he TRUELY had planned but she was not buying this act. He was trying to "win her over" with this bullshit and she was NOT about to buy a word of it. He had been in her room when she slept she knew that what he did she didn't know but she could tell somehow maybe something in the back of her mind did see somehow that his actions in her roomwere sick and vile. She had no idea what he truely had planned but if he thought he was going to take her or try to he had a fight on his hand*

I am not being a bitch to you Jared YOU are crossing the line I have told you I have NO interest in you AT ALL other than a brother and you cant do that you have to turn it into some sick twisted fantasy world or whatever now Times Up Lets GO. Take me back to Dads office NOW!

*Her eyes were closed as long as he was behind her but she could still feel his eyes on ehr and his mind rattling with sick disgusting plots against her for his own demented needs*
 
Jared could feel himself pulsing with anger, his very hands throbbing as red hot blood boiled through them. He wanted to hurt her, to let her see all the pain she was causing him right now as they spoke. How could she be so heartless?
But he stopped himself. He had to. She didn't want him. Jared growled, stepping back into the car.
"Fine," His only word. He waited for her to get in before driving in a fevered hurry back to her father's work place.
"See you at dinner, sis," He sped off, wanting to be alone for a few hours. He went home.
 
~Ellena~

*Shook up she hurried into her fathers office building and straightened up in the bathroom before going to see her father and gettong some money for shopping and getting her car towed and the tire changed.*
 
Jared laid on his bed, hands behind his back, staring up at the ceiling. Thoughts criss crossed in his mind, wondering just where it had all gone wrong. In his dreams, or fantasies rather, after he took her out to the spot and had the talk, she always forgave him, wanted to go out with him, and they had wonderful earth shattering sex.
What had he done wrong?
"She's just a bitch..." He said to himself, knowing it was true. She was an uptight stuck in the mud little bitch who had to be taught that he was right and she was wrong.
"I'm going to have to fuck her, to prove how much I love her."
Mom was cleaning the kitchen downstairs. Water ran, as she used a sponge to clear off the counter tops.
"Mom, do you know how long it's been since you and Dad went out to a nice dinner together?"
His mother, a very sharp witted woman, put her hand on her hip as she gave him that knowing motherly look.
"What do you want?"
"Ok, to be honest. I want a night alone with my sister. We had a fight today at the track meeting."
"I told you to get along with her, Jared."
"I know, I know. I'm trying. It's just hard, is all," Cause she's a bitch," That's why I want you and Dad to go out tonight. I was thinking Ellena and I could stay here, watch a movie, eat some pizza, and just calm things down between us."
Mom thought about it. The idea did have promise. She got a nice dinner with her new husband, and able to leave the house for the night. He could already see the sparkles in her eyes.
There were sparkles in his eyes too.
"Ok, they'll be home soon. We'll go out for a few hours, some dinner, maybe go to a theatre. We could stop by a hotel, not even return until tomorrow..."
"That's perfect," He would need all night to break her in anyway.
"Good, now, finish with the kitchen," She tossed him the soapy sponage. Jared caught it, feigning a smile.
"Yeah... chores," He got to work.
 
~Ellena~

*Her car fixed and towed back to hte house she rode home with her father*

YOU are too quiet El whats wrong.

Just a fight with Jared dad nothing new.

*Sighing as he drove he had seen the way Jared looked at her and wondered sometimes but thought nothing of it* Please try to get along

I try he is a stubborn creep who has to have evrything his way Dad... Are you sure I can't move out and live on campus next year at the university... PLEASE

No you will spend your freshman year living at home period I told you that now wets go inside and all be nice okay *pulling in the driveway*

Yeah I'll try *SHe walked in and straight to her room locking the door*
 
It was another half hour before Jared finally waved goodbye as his parents drove away. His mother had promised them a night alone, and after peaking with her husband for a few minutes, it had become a done deal.
Jared didn't want to think about what they were going to do to each other, but he thought it best to think of what he would do to his baby sister now that they were all alone and ready to play.
He had to make this casual at first, something like a neutral ground had been made by them. He didn't think he could get her to trust him, but he was sure that she might let her guard down for a bit.
Jared came up to her room, knocking.
"Hey, they're gone for the night. Looks like you and me for dinner. I was thinking pizza, you in?"
 
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~Ellena~

Maybe later just go do whatever Jared and leave me alone okay. Not in the mood to deal with you or anything other than homework. K

*Sighs barely feeling safe when her dad is here and her door is locked much less with them gone and her here alone with Jared*
 
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"Ellena," Jared rattled on the door handle, letting it shake in it's lock. He pushed against the door, but only so much that it made noise.
"You can't get rid of me so easily. Sweetie, come on, put that shit behind you. Let's just be brother and sister, ok? Now, I, as a brother, want to give you, my sister, a pizza. Open up so we can talk, all right? Our parents are gone, and I promised them that we would get along... you don't seem to be helping."
He pressed against the door, harder this time, so it bent slightly in on her side.
"Ellena, open the door... or I might hurt you. I don't want to, so just open it, ok?"
 
~Ellena~

*She closed her eyes when he spoke of hurting her but with the door closed she had some safety she hoped*

Just let me know when the Pizza gets here I have to have the Chem paper done for class tomorrow
 
Jared pounded on the door now, over and over again. Small splinters began to show in the wood. It was cracking, she was cracking.
"There is no pizza, not yet. I didn't call, and I'm not going to call until you open up and come out here. I'm done with talking, it's time you learned a fucking lesson in matters."
Jared pushed hard on the door, and it bent at a weak angle in the middle, threatening to give.
"Don't make me break it down. Just unlock it like a good girl, and we can settle this."
 
~Ellena~

*Scared to death she franticly searched her room for the phone finding it she yelled to him*

Jared Go away or I call the cops
 
"Go ahead, you call the fucking cops. Bring them down here, by the time I'm done with you, you'll be on your knees sucking my cock, you bitch. Then what are you going to tell them?"
Jared leaned back, and rammed into the door. It cracked, a huge split in the middle, just enough so he could see into the room.
"What do you think they'll do about that? Huh Sis? What if I tell them you love fucking your brother night and day? We'd both go to jail."
Jared's hand snaked in, looking for the knob, after a few seconds of searching, he finally got it, trying first one way, then another. With a loud click, it finally released.
The door flung open, and Jared stood there, sweating, breathing hard, and looking at her like a prize he had just won.
"You fucking bitch. It's timed you learned a few manners."
 
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