shower surprise

biscuit1369

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one day i came home from work to find the wife's car home before me. when i went into the house, i could hear the shower running. now our shower curtain is a two-piece curtain, with the slit in the middle, and i was getting hard thinking of what we could do in the shower so i stuck just my pretty hard cock in the slit in the curtain, but just my cock, as a joke. immediately she began sucking and licking me and was even licking my balls. all the whole time she was holding the curtains shut. it didn't take me long to have one gusher of an orgasm. she swallowed every thrust and drop. it was pure heaven. when she stood up, she opened the curtains and SURPRISE!!! , it was my sister-in-law, who was just as hot as my wife. i was in shock. but she had this smile that was so seductive. she said that i had to pay her back if i didn't want her to tell my wife. she said that one night she and my wife were talking about our sex life, and how much she loved the way i performed oral sex on her and the way i always licked her asshole. that's what the payment was to be. she never had her ass licked and she wanted me to eat her from behind with her on all fours, and not to forget to tongue that lucious ass of hers...............
this whole story was made up, but maybe someone who really knows how to write erotic stories, could have some fun with it and print it here. any way, that's all.
 
Why not you?

biscuit1369 said:
one day i came home from work to find the wife's car home before me. ...
this whole story was made up, but maybe someone who really knows how to write erotic stories, could have some fun with it and print it here.

Why don't you write it. You've presented a good outline of the plot. With the help of a volunteer editor for the mechanics of dialogue and narration, you could flesh this out into a fairly long story that fits YOUR vision.

Many of us write erotic stories for practice, to learn more about "selling a story" to the readers. The mechanics of storytelling are the same for any genre of fiction and they can be learned. The spark of imagination that comes up with a unique scenario like yours is what distinguishes really good erotica from the mediocre masses.
 
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