Show me your best sex scene

[GaryLMMartin]

As a writer, I know what I know but I don't know what I don't know. Can you give me a link to the best sex scene you've ever written? EDIT: Or, if you're hung up on the term "best", just one that you think is very good?
Thanks!!!

 

[SimonDoom]

I can't think of one best scene, but here's my advice: rather than have people hand you their own ideas of a good sex scene, do your homework. Read stories and figure out what you like. I read stories at Literotica for 15 years before I wrote a single one. By the time I wrote, I had a very good idea of what was erotic to me and how I wanted to write. You don't have to wait 15 years, obviously, but there's no substitute for putting some work into it and figuring out how YOU want to do sex scenes, not how others do it.

 

[TheRedChamber]

I can't think of one best scene, but here's my advice: rather than have people hand you their own ideas of a good sex scene, do your homework. Read stories and figure out what you like. I read stories at Literotica for 15 years before I wrote a single one. By the time I wrote, I had a very good idea of what was erotic to me and how I wanted to write. You don't have to wait 15 years, obviously, but there's no substitute for putting some work into it and figuring out how YOU want to do sex scenes, not how others do it.

All true, but I'm all for a AH author nominated best sex scene circle jerk.

(I'm just going to let others post first so I don't end up with the soggy biscuit. I mean, I need time to think...)

Instead of best we could do two or three most interesting or unique.

 

[GaryLMMartin]

Sure you can give two or three. And I wouldn't be asking if I had found ones I liked. Most of the ones I've read have been mechanical acts like you'd see at a 4H fair, not exciting at all (to me). I've found I like ones mixed in with reluctance or seduction.

 

[YANKEE DAN]

I think the best sex scenes are the ones with great context, in terms of erotic stories. They also need to be long enough though. Some stories I really like are super hot but then have only a few paragraphs of sex meaning I can't really masturbate to that story (maybe this is just me). Also if a story has sexy themes and short scenes building up to the big ones that helps them shine.

I love both lots of dialogue stlyes and long descriptive paragraphs, but lean towards the latter.

If I did have to pick one of mine I'd say this lesbian 3some (noncon) from my series Abbey of Disillusion. https://www.literotica.com/s/the-abbey-of-disillusion-ch-03?page=3

This scene is partly inspired by the stories of a lesbian author 'Littlemissblair' who wrote a lot of reluctant lesbian stuff. In this scene a dominant older lesbian is introducing a young lady to sapphic love with the help of her submissive sex slave, there's also some magic aided futa (shemale) action.

 

[Stimtheone]

On one side I am tempted to post here this one page long desperate and passionate coupling between a boy and a girl, on the other I think each have their value for one reason or another. Yes, some are better than others, but it is hard to judge which is best, just which might have been liked more. I have a good number of scenes in my epilogue which qualify.

But I think the best one is this hookup in a park where a boy was getting comforted by his fear and it led to him actually going to therapy. It did not make the final cut, sadly.

 

[TarnishedPenny]

Define ‘best’.

 

[yowser]

Define ‘best’.

This is indeed 'the rub.'

I had one tale that a commenter confessed caused not one but two orgasms(!). Sheesh.

Another story drew the comment 'your descriptions of the folios was almost as titillating as the actual intercourse.' (I know, this can be interpreted a couple different ways - maybe a back-handed compliment?)

But which one was 'better'? I liked the second one more, personally.

 

[GaryLMMartin]

If the word "best" is causing problems, just one that's very good would be sufficient.

 

[BobbyBrandt]

The majority of my stories only contain scenes of implied sexual activity. Readers of these novels embrace using their imagination I suppose.

I won't claim that they are the "best", but I enjoyed writing the sex scenes in my "Before They Were Stars" series the most because I was placing real-world people into imaginary scenarios of my choosing.

 

[EmilyMiller]

As a writer, I know what I know but I don't know what I don't know. Can you give me a link to the best sex scene you've ever written? EDIT: Or, if you're hung up on the term "best", just one that you think is very good?
Thanks!!!

The one that turned me on most when remembering and writing it was at the denouement of Because I Deserve It.

It spans one and a half pages, but if you want to skip the preamble, you can start at the top of page four (the scene lasts pretty much to the end of the story).

WARNING: Don’t click if BDSM and anal is not your cup of tea.

Em

 

[ElectricBlue]

Sure you can give two or three. And I wouldn't be asking if I had found ones I liked. Most of the ones I've read have been mechanical acts like you'd see at a 4H fair, not exciting at all (to me). I've found I like ones mixed in with reluctance or seduction.

If we extract a scene from a story, that's all you're going to get here. Context is everything. That's why they're stories.

Sounds to me that you need to read more, rather than ask us to do a cut and paste. All you will get (and I notice, not many are biting) is a collection of disparate scenes from different writers, all with different styles, which probably won't help you at all.

 

[Kumquatqueen]

You wouldn't appreciate any of mine without surrounding context, but feel free to browse my stories for whatever sexualities and kinks float your boat.

One I'm proud of because of how succinct it is is as follows:

On Wednesday, I work quite cheerfully until Dan comes down for his 11 am blow-job. I work cheerfully at that, too.

Out of context, it's really not going to set the world alight, but as part of ch.2 of 14 it shows a mood changing without resorting to yet another sex scene where we already know what bits can go where and what noises they're probably making.

 

[EmilyMiller]

Define ‘best’.

<tina>better than all the rest</tina>

 

[TarnishedPenny]

<tina>better than all the rest</tina>

Chuckle.

Seriously, though, by what standard? Not trying to be argumentative, but <turner>best</turner> in terms of:

• sweet and gentle, reaffirming lovemaking?
• heart-pounding, ragged, howl-at-the-moon, mattress-pounding lust?
• uncertain, exploratory, first-time experimentation?
• wild kink? (If so, of what sort?)
• daring, shivery screwing?
• ‘Assassin’s Creed’ surprise sex?
• (and 57 others)

Also, would that be ‘best’ in terms of literary merit or how quickly a reader is turned on? They’re by no means one and the same.

My favourite almost certainly wouldn’t be everybody else’s and, frankly, with all due humility, I think they’re all pretty good. So, sorry, not trying to dodge an honest question, but the only possible answer is for somebody to read them all and choose their own ‘best’. It’s a journey.

I do hope the OP finds what they’re looking for.

 

[lovecraft68]

As with anything else best is subjective because there's different types of scenes for different stories.

But going by response in the Holy shit what the actual fuck was that?

Waaay back in 2010 My second story posted here was chapter one of Siblings with Benefits my long dark depressing story of a twenty year relationship between sibligs who had more issues than Kleenex has tissues.

The sex scene in that chapter just explodes and its nasty, its rough, its as much a fight as sex, and I recall someone sending me a feedback saying "God almighty, I'm still shaking. Who the hell are you?"

Its not for everyone, its incest and its rough and I am ashamed to admit that in that series and only in that one, did I go in on the "big cock' trope because it fit the character. I look back now and I'm like, really LC?

 

[EmilyMiller]

I do hope the OP finds what they’re looking for.

Yo are just playing karaoke aren’t you, hun?

Em

 

[GaryLMMartin]

I appreciate all your replies. I'd love to see a good (not the best! never the best!) sex scene involving seduction and persuasion.

 

[SimonDoom]

I'll bite, I guess. I can't pick a "best sex scene" from my stories so I'll pick the one from my most popular story, Late Night On The Loveseat With Mom. https://literotica.com/s/late-night-on-the-loveseat-with-mom. Readers seemed to like it. It's the 62nd most-favorited story at Lit.

 

[TarnishedPenny]

OK, that narrows it down a fair bit.

I might suggest the penultimate scene from my Love Long Gone or, perhaps, one woman inviting another to a threesome Two, Plus One.

 

[EmilyMiller]

I appreciate all your replies. I'd love to see a good (not the best! never the best!) sex scene involving seduction and persuasion.

Do whips count?

Em

 

[GaryLMMartin]

Uh.....

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[Voboy]

Wait.

You've already got a million stories. Plenty of practice, in other words.

...just what is it you're looking for? Plainly you've written fuckscenes...

 

[GaryLMMartin]

Wait.

You've already got a million stories. Plenty of practice, in other words.

...just what is it you're looking for? Plainly you've written fuckscenes...

I want to learn how to do it better.

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[ElectricBlue]

I want to learn how to do it better.

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Link to my first hundred stories.

Try reading something outside the same category, maybe? Have you limited yourself by sticking to a narrow theme?