Should I keep writing

I haven't written for a while and wanted to get people's opinions on whether I should continue my story. Here is the link to the last chapter http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=356009 I look forward to hearing people's opinions good or bad

I took a quick peek, it's really not my cup of tea. I think the whole brother/sister thing has been way overdone.

I suppose the question should be, do you want to get back into writing? If the answer is yes, then the perfect place to start is where you left off. You have H's on both of your stories, so it would seem that the readers of that category were pleased with them.
 
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The category isn't my thing either, but I looked at this story. There are several errors a good editor could help you with, such as grammar and punctuation, eliminating word repetition, etc. Cutting your paragraphs to six to eight lines makes them easier to read on a screen.

Your dialogue should go in separate paragraphs so it isn't lost like it is now. You could put in more dialogue to add action and better flow to the scenes. She's teasing him, so build on that. Use verbal foreplay, even if she speaks more than he does.


As DK said, the question is do you want to get back into writing? If so, then go for it. See what happens. You won't know unless you try again.

Good luck.
 
Well this is s nice story, I hope you will continue on with it, I like the way you made Ashley into a little sex starved minx and I enjoyed the way you laid out the bombshell that Brad's parents are in the whole incest deal.

By all means do keep writing.

Kargan3033
 
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