should i continue with this story?..is it good?...my first attempt

[charlotte]

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[Edited by charlotte on 07-26-2000 at 08:36 AM]

 

[Dixon Carter Lee]

Sexual characters have to be 18 on Literotica, so you'll have to stop posting your story. Otherwise the writing isn't bad at all, and I encourage you to try something else.

 

[charlotte]

i am so sorry, please feel free to delete it..

 

[Sir]

Although you are of are of young age i must say that your story is quite well done.very detailed.Question.are you writing of a personal experience?it seems like it.Will be awaiting reply andrew@better.net

 

[charlotte]

smile..

thank you for your kind comments..
i don't think i am to talk about the story here, but will email you as you have suggested..thank you again

 

[hot-n-sexy]

Awesome story line!!

could you email me the rest of it please?

 

[Budokan]

Just change the age of the character, and throw in a paragraph break now and then. Not a bad effort, though.

 

[magicteen]

story is good please email rest of it mjbmagicrules@cs.com just rember that all legal story have charters over 18

 

[GuyJD]

WELL DONE

Technically, you never mentioned age in your story but several passages in it describe a young girl. The story is very well written and organized. So all that is needed with your story is a little modification. Other than that, keep up the good work.

 

[charlotte]

i want thank everyone for their advice and suggestions on making this story more acceptable and readable..i will give it another go and submit something at another time.

 

[GuyJD]

THIS IS ONLY A SUGGESTON

Charlotte,
If you prefer to keep your story as it is, underaged sex, you can. While Literotica does not post such stories on its website, there are others that does. Don't get me wrong. I am not criticizing Laurel, Literotica, or their policy for story submission. I ofter submit stories to 2 other websites, other than Literotica, and only one of them accept stories that contain underaged sex, incest stories, sex with animals, and/or rape stories. I have no problems with following website rules. In fact, I respect them.
Therefore, if you are interested in submitting your story "as is", send me an e-mail and I will send your the website that will print your story online.

 

[Laurel]

I ofter submit stories to 2 other websites, other than Literotica, and only one of them accept stories that contain underaged sex, incest stories, sex with animals, and/or rape stories.

Charlotte - to clarify, we do accept incest stories & nonconsent stories, and we will post bestiality stories in the "Extreme" section, which links to allextremesex.com. Our only limit is the 18+ age limit. Feel free to alter the character's age or make it more vague and I will be very happy to post it. Also, feel free to use our exclusive Volunteer Editor program to help fine-tune your story.