Should I continue this story? **This is about gay male erotica**

[Bothways4days]

Hello Literotica!

I have never written erotica before and for a long time I was too nervous to share my story. The first part of my saga seems to have been received well from the majority of people that read it, but I would love as much feedback as possible. After a week of way too much over thinking the second episode of my tale is now available to read as well. I would really like to know if anyone would be interested in me continuing this delve into my first gay relationship.

After The Party
https://www.literotica.com/s/after-the-party-44

After The Party Pt. 2
www.literotica.com/s/after-the-party-pt-02

 

[JasonClearwater]

Hello Literotica!

I have never written erotica before and for a long time I was too nervous to share my story. The first part of my saga seems to have been received well from the majority of people that read it, but I would love as much feedback as possible. After a week of way too much over thinking the second episode of my tale is now available to read as well. I would really like to know if anyone would be interested in me continuing this delve into my first gay relationship.

After The Party
https://www.literotica.com/s/after-the-party-44

After The Party Pt. 2
www.literotica.com/s/after-the-party-pt-02

Very nice writing. It's hot, it's well written (better than mine, if I'm honest). Keep writing, mate. You're too good to stop now.

 

[Masaladosa]

Hello Literotica!

I have never written erotica before and for a long time I was too nervous to share my story. The first part of my saga seems to have been received well from the majority of people that read it, but I would love as much feedback as possible. After a week of way too much over thinking the second episode of my tale is now available to read as well. I would really like to know if anyone would be interested in me continuing this delve into my first gay relationship.

After The Party
https://www.literotica.com/s/after-the-party-44

After The Party Pt. 2
www.literotica.com/s/after-the-party-pt-02

Reading your story, will post my thoughts in a while.

 

[fma20fma]

hi

just keep writing. improve with reader comments.

 

[Masaladosa]

Reading your story, will post my thoughts in a while.

Pretty amazing stuff you have put up there! Keep writing and just one suggestion, include more one on one conversation between the guys for readers to read. It builds the momentum