bisolom
A Nice Guy
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I wrote a "how to" thread to enterain a friend titled "How to kiss"
I've been told I should try writing but I dont know if its idle flattery or a serious suggestion.
I'm working on a new short piece entitled "How to eat Pussy"
Should I keep practicing my writing skills or "keep my day job"? I'm retireds actually.
Any and all comments would be appreciated. Here is the article so far...
He settles in, comfortably, between her legs. He places her legs over his massive shoulders and snuggles into the smooth, creamy, softness of her thighs. Looking up at her face, he sees her excitement and feels her quivering. He looks down at the object of his desire and feels the moist heat radiating there. Slowly, slowly, his head moves down while he gently blows his hot breath up and down the lenght of her engorged lips. First contact!
She gasps and begins to moan. She feels herself opening as he nuzzles her slit.
Her juices soak his face and beard as his nose gently bumps the bottom of her clit.
Her moans increase and her breathing becomes shallow and more rapid. He extends his broad, flat, tongue. Starting at the perineum, he laps up her slit, applying just enough pressure to engage both pairs of her lips. He makes several passes, savoring her sweet, thick juices. At the end of each pass, he flicks her clit and pushes down on it firmly with his tongue...just once... and then the journey begins anew. Driven by his teasing, her lust incinerates logical thought, leaving overpowering need in its place. She stiffens her legs around his head and curls her fingers through his hair, trying desperately to guide his tongue to her need.
Wrapping his arms around her legs, he places his large powerful hands on the inside of her thighs, easily overpowering her as he applies pressure outward. He is in control.
He pulls his mouth back slightly, leaving her throbbing pussy. Overwhelmed by the sudden loss, she screams in lust "please! please!" over and over again. Needy, begging, she acknowledges his power and her need. She feels like a little girl, at the mercy of this giant of a man.
Her pleas begin to overwhem him, fueling his lust. Feelings of domiation overtake him, driving him him to possess her, to conquer her...body and soul. He places his hands on the supple cheeks of her ass, lifting her off the bed. He stiffens his tongue and savagely jams it in her cunt while his mouth seizes her swollen lips.
She screams. Her high-pitched moan driving her soul into his. Arching her back, she smashes her hips against his mouth impaling herseelf further on his tongue. She pulls on his hair, seemingly trying to drive his face into her needy slit. Her body stiffens, her thighs crushing his head. "Fuck, oh god, don't stop, please, so good, more!" she screams, almost incoherently, as she feels her orgasm start to build to levels she never thought possible.
His tongue attacks her wet tunnel like a starving animal. His mind is fully engulfed in his lust. His existence reduced to the warm, sweet tasting, wetness of her sex. "More!" is his only rational thought. He senses her getting closer to their mutual goal...a mind-blowing climax, her final surrender to him. He shifts his attack to his final target...her clit.
I've been told I should try writing but I dont know if its idle flattery or a serious suggestion.
I'm working on a new short piece entitled "How to eat Pussy"
Should I keep practicing my writing skills or "keep my day job"? I'm retireds actually.
Any and all comments would be appreciated. Here is the article so far...
He settles in, comfortably, between her legs. He places her legs over his massive shoulders and snuggles into the smooth, creamy, softness of her thighs. Looking up at her face, he sees her excitement and feels her quivering. He looks down at the object of his desire and feels the moist heat radiating there. Slowly, slowly, his head moves down while he gently blows his hot breath up and down the lenght of her engorged lips. First contact!
She gasps and begins to moan. She feels herself opening as he nuzzles her slit.
Her juices soak his face and beard as his nose gently bumps the bottom of her clit.
Her moans increase and her breathing becomes shallow and more rapid. He extends his broad, flat, tongue. Starting at the perineum, he laps up her slit, applying just enough pressure to engage both pairs of her lips. He makes several passes, savoring her sweet, thick juices. At the end of each pass, he flicks her clit and pushes down on it firmly with his tongue...just once... and then the journey begins anew. Driven by his teasing, her lust incinerates logical thought, leaving overpowering need in its place. She stiffens her legs around his head and curls her fingers through his hair, trying desperately to guide his tongue to her need.
Wrapping his arms around her legs, he places his large powerful hands on the inside of her thighs, easily overpowering her as he applies pressure outward. He is in control.
He pulls his mouth back slightly, leaving her throbbing pussy. Overwhelmed by the sudden loss, she screams in lust "please! please!" over and over again. Needy, begging, she acknowledges his power and her need. She feels like a little girl, at the mercy of this giant of a man.
Her pleas begin to overwhem him, fueling his lust. Feelings of domiation overtake him, driving him him to possess her, to conquer her...body and soul. He places his hands on the supple cheeks of her ass, lifting her off the bed. He stiffens his tongue and savagely jams it in her cunt while his mouth seizes her swollen lips.
She screams. Her high-pitched moan driving her soul into his. Arching her back, she smashes her hips against his mouth impaling herseelf further on his tongue. She pulls on his hair, seemingly trying to drive his face into her needy slit. Her body stiffens, her thighs crushing his head. "Fuck, oh god, don't stop, please, so good, more!" she screams, almost incoherently, as she feels her orgasm start to build to levels she never thought possible.
His tongue attacks her wet tunnel like a starving animal. His mind is fully engulfed in his lust. His existence reduced to the warm, sweet tasting, wetness of her sex. "More!" is his only rational thought. He senses her getting closer to their mutual goal...a mind-blowing climax, her final surrender to him. He shifts his attack to his final target...her clit.
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