Shock and Awe on First Swap pts 1 and 2

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Finally getting around to making some comments on my second story. Its in two parts both of which can be found here on my list of stories:

http://www.literotica.com/stories/memberpage.php?uid=233490

I have gotten two anonymous comments saying that Betty did things with Allen she wouldn't do with her husband. Did I say that? or even imply it? Or are those readers getting it mixed up with Do For Lust?? I didn't mean to say that or imply it.
I have gotten some Anonymous comments that I want to respond to and see if the senders will read my answers here. While at the same time saying a couple things to any one else who reads this.
I have gotten two comments, one comment for part one and one comment for part two, from two BI girls. Supposedly the first part reminded them of their parents and the asked me not to do any other stories like that. The second note sounded that not meant to be taken seriously but whatever the case I thought I would say that I have plans in my mind for twenty-five to thirty-five stories and only one other is this type. It will be a sequel to Shock and Awe. A couple of others may come close, but they won’t be about swappers.
The other anonymous note sender was pained by my spelling. To them and to all the others who had been pained by my spelling. I say Sorry. I did use a spell checker but I do have a problem with wrong usage words, and typos. I am working on it. I have tried three editors. Two disappeared after I sent them a story to look over. Actually one sent back the first one fourth of the total story of Shock and Awe before she disappeared.
And to a couple comment writers and who ever else who may think so, this story is not true. I just decided this story needed to be first person. None of my stories are true. Well I might do a couple dreams that me and my wife have had but while we really had the dreams they did not really happen.


For those who have thank you for reading both pts.

TabooTeller
 
Ps here

One person wrote me and mentioned that I goofed with Allen's car and Betty's car. In other owrds one minute it was Becky's and next it was Allen's.

If so Opps Sorry about that.

And I will say that two people so far seem think that Betty did some things with Allen she won't do with her husband. I didn't mean to imply this if I did.



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