She Stood In A Shadowed Doorway

[ROBERTDAVIDSON]

SHE STOOD IN A SHADOWED DOORWAY

by Robert Davidson

She stood in a shadowed doorway
Awaiting the appointed time of delight
Eyes mocking love as
Lips of lust gleam in a moon-blanched night.

She stood in a shadowed doorway
When I shattered the dark with a light
Claiming a fierce kiss on
The porcelain pallor of a face so white.

She stood in a shadowed doorway
The touch of her body against mine stuns
As our sexes meet
Vaster than explosions of burst suns.

Our lone paths cross, then are blown apart forever
As I got what I wanted, and she her cash did recover.
The scowl of pleasure's lips now scorn me ever
Point down to the pit, mocking this sated lover.

She stood in a shadowed doorway
Her look of reproach unnerves, conceives
A cool challenge while
My lust blew away like dead winter leaves.

Copyright 2005 Robert Davidson

 

[flyguy69]

...
As our sexes meet
Vaster than explosions of burst suns....

Ouch! And I thought soup burns were bad!

 

[wildsweetone]

hi Robert and welcome to the Poetry Forum.

i just want to say that i like your poem and you've given me food for thought with the way you have used language to ensure the rhyme continues. thank you for that.

 

[ewopper]

SHE STOOD IN A SHADOWED DOORWAY

by Robert Davidson

She stood in a shadowed doorway
Awaiting the appointed time of delight
Eyes mocking love as
Lips of lust gleam in a moon-blanched night.

She stood in a shadowed doorway
When I shattered the dark with a light
Claiming a fierce kiss on
The porcelain pallor of a face so white.

She stood in a shadowed doorway
The touch of her body against mine stuns
As our sexes meet
Vaster than explosions of burst suns.

Our lone paths cross, then are blown apart forever
As I got what I wanted, and she her cash did recover.
The scowl of pleasure's lips now scorn me ever
Point down to the pit, mocking this sated lover.

She stood in a shadowed doorway
Her look of reproach unnerves, conceives
A cool challenge while
My lust blew away like dead winter leaves.

Copyright 2005 Robert Davidson

great imgery, content and great write

 

[SeattleRain]

Hello-- I liked this poem! I was not sure about the repetition of the line, but in the end it did not bug me like sometimes repetition does. Welcome, and stick around a while. Hopefully you have found the new poems pages, and how to submit your work there, if not, give a call and someone will help you out.


Seattle Rain

 

[SeattleRain]

Ouch! And I thought soup burns were bad!

Mister Fly, we have been over this before,
you are supposed to at least say hello before being a smart ass
Now over my knee right now it is time for a little reinforcement...

SR

 

[Guest]

Mister Fly, we have been over this before,
you are supposed to at least say hello before being a smart ass
Now over my knee right now it is time for a little reinforcement...

SR

Can I watch?

Oh, and Hi to Robert, welcome to the rough 'n tumble of Poetry Forum.

 

[flyguy69]

Mister Fly, we have been over this before,
you are supposed to at least say hello before being a smart ass
Now over my knee right now it is time for a little reinforcement...

SR

Ouch! My ass smarts!

 

[SeattleRain]

Ouch! My ass smarts!

Your turn, Tess, I don't think he got his lesson and I have to get my OWN child off of the bus. I trust you know how to handle a strap?

 

[Guest]

Your turn, Tess, I don't think he got his lesson and I have to get my OWN child off of the bus. I trust you know how to handle a strap?

My hand smarts more than his tush but it's got a nice glow and there are tears in his eyes. Can I stop now?

 

[annaswirls]

My hand smarts more than his tush but it's got a nice glow and there are tears in his eyes. Can I stop now?

She says yes. Until he says please m'am may I have another.

 

[flyguy69]

My hand smarts more than his tush but it's got a nice glow and there are tears in his eyes. Can I stop now?

Oh, good. With the heat from my ass I should be able to defrost my windshield before driving home. Now if I can just figure out how to drive standing up....

 

[flyguy69]

Oh, good. With the heat from my ass I should be able to defrost my windshield before driving home. Now if I can just figure out how to drive standing up....

Was I winking the wrong eye?

 

[annaswirls]

Oh, good. With the heat from my ass I should be able to defrost my windshield before driving home. Now if I can just figure out how to drive standing up....

I got a total Homer Simpson image from this one...

I think your best position would be to balance yourself, all fours, on the steering wheel, ass to windshield and watch for traffic between your legs.

um

Tess will work the gas and brakes.
I will work the camera.

 

[flyguy69]

I got a total Homer Simpson image from this one...

I think your best position would be to balance yourself, all fours, on the steering wheel, ass to windshield and watch for traffic between your legs.

um

Tess will work the gas and brakes.
I will work the camera.

Hey! Careful with that stickshift!