SHE LOVED HER FIANCE, BUT...

[RIPAphrodite]

I skimmed this story at the suggestion of a friend, I both love and hate it. Anyone have any thoughts they’d like to share with me?

I’m pretty tipsy right now so apologies if I don’t respond!

https://www.literotica.com/s/she-loved-her-fiance-but

 

[DarkSollat]

I didn't like it. It feels more like a substract or a plan than an actual story. Everything here just... happens and had no impact on me.

What do you like about this work, @RIPAphrodite ?

 

[RIPAphrodite]

Good idea, maybe falling a bit flat in execution…

I don’t want to piss in it too much as sometimes short stories are good for a dirty wank