Shattered Innocence (closed)

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She went for a run in the park like she did everyday. Her hair up in a ponytail and her luscious figure outlined in a pair of running shorts and a sports bra with a tank top over hit. She was built well and she kept herself in shape.

The shorts accentuated her tiny waist and her flat stomach. The top clung to her chest and back as she began to sweat. She paused and bent over at the waist as she rested her hands on her knees and took in gulps of air. She had run further today then she normally did and it was time to head back to her cottage on the beach.

She ran all the wy back to the house and paused to talk to the mailman as he was there with her mail. He admired her figure and handed her mail. She walks away and shuffles through the mail as she heads to the back of her cottage. Moving around to the back the sun has set and no one is on the beach out behind her house as she moves quietly inside. She usually leaves the back glass door open not bothering to lock it when she runs.
 
I'm watch her run from my house, just as I do evrey day, watching the little harlot moveing so freely in her tiny shorts, her body so obviously unencombered by underthings. Disgusting. I adjust my self, curseing her for giveing me an erection... It's time to do somthing.

Time to punish this wench.

I slip out of my house after she passes and start running after her. When she walks into her house, she doesn't even see me running, she's so oblivious. I walk into the house after her, locking the back door and turning to look at this woman already in her living room.
 
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She hadn't heard anyone running up behind her. She moves into the livingroom and begins to walk towards the back of the house. Just as she hears the back door closed nad click she drops her mail onto the table ans spins around,"Wh...Who are you and why are you in my house?" HEr voice cracks as she talks and she starts to back up along the hallway. Turnign she runs and heads into her bedroom and slams the door but not in time as your push her back and shove her onto the bed.

Her eyes flash open and she screams. Your slap sends her head snapping to the side as she is growled at,"you scream like that again and I will cut you up after I am done." Shivering now she feels your hands going to her breasts as she is felt up and your voice fills the room with the names you are calling her.
 
I don't even hear myself speak, I'm so angry at this bitch for flaunting her body at me. I use the knife I grabbed from the kitchen to cut up the middle of her shirt, leaveing it in tatters and stop, stareing at her heaveing breasts with rose tipped nipples... so wonton, so disgustiing.

I tear the rest of her shirt off and stuff part of it in her mouth, then turn her around and shove her to her couch. I watch a police man go by unaware as I close the drapes and prepare to punish this slut for inflameing my desires
 
Oh gawd," I thought," He is going to rape me." I begin to struggle harder as he shove me against the couch when he goes to close the drapes and then curtains I scramble up and begin to run again. He is fast I will give him that much and I land on the floor of the hallway on my stomch the wind knocked out of me. He begins to pull me back against him harder and I can feel him tugging at my shorts. His nails scraping my skin as I drag the makeshift gag from my lips and scream again.
 
She screams again and it sends a spike through my mind.. I close my eyes with pain for a moment, then stare down at her. I slam my fist into her jaw again and again until she stops screaming. I wonder briefly if I killed her... but then she shifts slightly and nod. Good, I don't want her dead yet.

I grab a handfull of her hair and drag her into her bedroom where I throw her on the bed. While she is still groggy, I look for things with wich to secure her nubile body,
 
The first blow dazed me and the subsequent others rocked me for a lopp. He finally stopped hitting me and I tried to breath through my broken nose as he climbed off me and dragged me by me hair into the bedroom. I couldn't scream I was in so much pain. When he tossed me on the bed I rolled to my side and started to cry softly. My face hurt and my chest hurt were the knife had scraped my skin as he begane to search my drawers for god only knows what.
 
I find sevral scarves and turn to her... I can see her bleeding a little between the breasts and from the nose. Never mind, she'll have worse before I'm done.

I streach her out, binding her hand and foot to the bed and cut her shorts off. What a supprise, the little slut wears panties. Not for long. Those get suffed into her mouth and tied in place with another scarf. SHe has enough fo the damn things.
 
Laying spread eagle now on the bed ai Twist and moan as he shoves my panties into my mouth. Closing my Eyes I can feel him looking at me devouring me with his gaze. Blood begins to slide along my breast bona and it stings as I continue to struggle against my bonds. I scream in frustration and defeat as he leers at me and licks his lips.
 
I stare down at her body, looking at her breasts and her dirty cunt, just like all the others... Well, first to deal with my lust, then to truely punish her.

I don't remember taking my pants off, but I am sinking into her hot body, knowing I won't last long... I never do at first.
 
When he climbs up onto the bed and grips my thighs and then thrust into me. The dry pain of being fucked like that sends the pain level higher and I scream into the gag. His cock is large and thick and it feels like he is ripping me apart as I scream. He doens't seem to care as he continues to thrust in and out of my beaten body.
 
I pounded into her again and again, lowering my face to lick along the line of blood I drew, but fucking her... the rough, raw feeling of her dry cunt drives me almost mad with lust... THe dirty cunt did it deleberately. Trying to infalme me and distract me from my cause.

She would pay.

I achived my first climax and take it out of her to whipe clean against her face, dragging it across one eye.
 
The pain was unbearable as he shoved it in deeper and deeper he finally came and I relaxed back onto the bed hoping he was done. When he got up and wiped his cock along my face I turned it to the side and tried to get away from him. he reached out and grabbed my hair using it to clean his cock and yanked my head.
 
I must have hit her nose, beacuse the slut screamed like I couldn't belive, even through the gag. I almost had some pitty for her then. Almost. I walked away from her and bent over to pick up the knife where it had fallen in my lust. I look at the knife, then look at her again. Not so smart now, was she?

I wanted to do somthing she would never forget... but remembered what happened last time. They'd be after me for this, but I wanted some time to run.

I take the blade and cut her stomach lightly, just to watch her jump and scream.
 
Her screams through the gag split the air as she writhes on the bed,. The tip of the knife easily cutting through her flesh. Her hands clench and her legs tighten her head thrusting back into the pillow beneath her. The knife kept cutting and the pain ripping through my brain was more intense then anything I had ever felt.
 
I watch her enjoy my little gift and know it's not the last time I'll mark her. THe way she turns and writhes is perfectly calculated to make me hard again. The slut, trying to ply me with her whiles even now. I cut her again, just to prove I wasn't distracted.

Then I sank my cock into her dirty cunt once more.
 
Her sobs are harder now as she feels the knif cut once more and she can't see what he cut into her and she closes her eyes as she feels his cock thrust into her hot cunt again. She is already slick with his other load of cum it doesn't hurt as bad this time. Her head digs back into the bed as she tries to just lay there and let him do as he pleases. He will anyway.
 
I let go inside her once again and pull out once more. I stare down at her body, twitching and writheing... stupid slut. If she knew how to avoid more punishment, I might not be here at all, but no....

I make another mark on her stomach with the knife. One more step in my masterpiece. My punishment for this slut's wonton ways.
 
Another scream rips from the gag as he slices once more and tears leak from my eyes as he finally slides his dick back out of my sopping wet cunt. His eyes are maniacal and He is scaring me to death. I twist and try to get out of my restraints to no avail.
 
She twists more, trying to seduce me with her dirty body, her evil whiles. But I know now, I Must not allow myself to be drawn from my path. I start carveing again, drawing into her flesh...
 
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The pain, it doesn't stop as he continues to carve block letters into my stomach. His hand is shakey making the knife waver in each cut as I dig my head back into the bed. Blood slides along my stomach and along the sheets it covers me and he continues to cut. Everytime I move the knife digs deeper and he keeps cutting.
 
Slowly, I finish my work and blot her skin where the blood runs down her belly to mix with my sin leaning out of her. I blot the words again, holding the sheet in place long enogh for the blood to soak through legibly to the other side. I walk to her side and show her the words. The blessing made from flesh and blood. The words read;

"THIS ONE IS PUREIFIED"

I hold the sheet up before her until I can see by her reaction that she has read, that she has understood. THen i drape it over her face and turn to walk from the house forever.
 
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He finally finished and he lifted the sheet up from my body and showed me in my own blood what was written there. When he covered my face I thought I was dead and then all I heard was the door clicking shut as he left the house.
 
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