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[alildevilish]

This is just a lil thread if anyone one wants to share a poem, a song or a love story. One youve written or just one that brings back memories.

Ill be posting some of my poems....



Crouded




It just gets so crouded love inside my heart

I wish I could empty it out

And run away instead

Its just the things you do and say

When you try and make me feel this way, let me say

It just gets so crouded love inside my heart

I just wish I could empty it out

And not feel a thing

It makes me so crazy

When you tell those lies

Its like you never even cared at all so I react

It just gets so crouded love here that I can not breathe

I wish I could empty out the pain

That fills my veins and

Never, ever feel the sting beneath my skin again, dont you know

Its just so crouded love in the emothion

If only I could empty it out

And run away instead

Its just to crouded here to love

To crouded here to feel

I wish I could run away intstead

Run away from you

 

[alildevilish]

I longed to be in your arms

I Longed To Be In Your Arms


Whos hiding in your secret thoughts

I wonder whom you think of when your feelings start to stir

I look into your eyes who do you need most

Will you let me into your secret thoughts?

When I know all the feelings that you gave never meant a thing

Oh my beautiful, beautiful fucked up man

Vividly living in all your charm

How I longed to be in your arms

Youve come to me from the devil to teach me a lesson

Covering me with deciet your whole image I was betrayed

Oh you heald everything, everything in your arms

Took all you wanted from me

Until your need was filled then you ran

Leave me with all these questions

When just what I need most are awnsers I cant have

Oh my beautiful, beautiful fucked up man

Vividly living in all your charm

Oh how I longed to be in your arms

Youre so beautiful; my beautiful fucked up man

I long to be in your arms till this feeling starts to fade

 

[riff]

Witness
-by W.S. Merwin

I want to tell what the forests
were like

I will have to speak
in a forgotton language

 

[alildevilish]

fading

Fading




Im fading; fading away into a memory

Maybe someday ill cross your mind

Youll be reminded of me

Could our feelings have survived though time?

It all now feels like a dream

It couldnt be someone like you loving me

Im fading; fading away into your memory

Now everyday that passes I secretly dream

New memorys you build will soon bury me

Scattered winds have carried me out of your thoughts

Time builds new feelings wheater you look or not

In time Ill build memorys to cover your image

Im fading; fading away into a memory

Soon my love for you will fade away to

Setting my broken heart free

Im fading; fading away into a memory

Scattered winds please carry him out of my thoughts

Fade him; fade him out of my memory

Soon I will be finally set free the wind will carry me

 

[alildevilish]

I cried for you

I cried for you

Following the sighing grin

Ever swiftly moving past the feeling within

Touching for the essence of what will never be again

I cant forget the feeling of crashing against the wind

The moment burned right through me

I did what I had to do

The moment burned right through me

I cried all the tears I had for you

When will I recognize why you don't need me in your life?

I cried my whole heart to you every inch of my soul

Swimming in emotion these are the tears I've cried for you

Struggling to keep our existence if only you knew more

Drowning in the endless feelings all a part of my life

I'm overcome by oceans of pain only known by you and I

The moment burned right through me

I did what I had to do

The moment burned right through me

I cried all the tears I had for you

Ill never understand why you don't want me in your life

For the fear Id never be near you I cried out my thoughts to you

Blurting out the aspirations of my soul I did what I had to do

I feared Id never be with you, Oh I feared

I feared Id never be with you I did what I had to do

These are all the tears I cried for you

I cried for you

 

[alildevilish]

a song

Boys II Men

(Spoken
Girl you know
We belong together
I have no time for
You to be playing
With my heart like this
You'll be mine forever
Baby, you just see

We belong together
And you that I'm right
Why do you play
With my heart,
Why do you play
With my mind?

Said we'd be forever
Said it'd never die
How could you love me
And leave me
And never say goodbye?

When I can't sleep at night
Without holding you tight
Girl, each time I try
I just break down and cry
Pain in my head oh
I'd rather be dead
Spinnin' around and around

CHORUS:
Although we've come to
The end of the road
Still I can't let you go
It's unnatural
You belong to me
I belong to you
Come to the
End of the road
Still I can't let you go
It's unnatural
You belong to me
I belong to you

Girl, I know you
Really love me,
You just don't realise
You've never
Been there before
It's only your first time

Maybe I'll forgive you, hmm
Maybe you'll try
We should be
Happy together
Forever, you and I

Can you love me again
Like you loved me before
This time I want you
To love me much more
This time instead
Just come to my bed
And baby just
Don't let me
Don't let me down

Repeat chorus

(Spoken
Girl I'm here for you
All those times of night
When you just hurt me
And just run out
With that other fella
Baby I knew about it
I just didn't care
You just don't understand
How much I love you do you?
I'm here for you

I'm not out to go out and
Cheat on you all night
Just like you did baby
But that's all right
Hey, I love you anyway
And I'm still gonna
Be here for you
Till my dying day baby
Right now, I'm just in
So much pain baby
'Cause you just won't
Come back to me
Will you?
Just come back to me

(Lonely)
Yes baby my
Heart is lonely
(Lonely)
My heart hurts baby
(Lonely)
Yes I feel pain too
Baby please

This time instead
Just come to my bed
And baby just
Don't let me go




I think Im sad today. Someone Slap Me!!!

 

[rubymyst]

Reflection,
Looking back from the shadow,
Collection.

Collecting,
Gathering upon the ground;
Selecting,
Places to pile,
Gathering without a sound
All the while.

Looking out,
A ghost that I think I know,
Looking back;

Myself reflected,
Myself detected.

 

[AzureAngel]

Sonnet 35
No more be grieved at that which thou has done :
Roses have thorns, and silver fountains mud ;
Clouds and eclipses stain both moon and sun,
And loathsome canker lives in sweetest bud.
All men make faults, and even I in this,
Authorizing thy trespass with compare,
Myself corrupting, salving thy amiss,
Excusing thy sins more than thy sins are ;
For to thy sensual fault I bring in sense
(Thy adverse party is thy advocate)
And 'gainst myself a lawful plea commence ;
Such civil war is in my love and hate
     That I an accessary needs must be
     To that sweet thief which sourly robs from me.

- William Shakespeare

 

[ShyGuy68]

Here's my attempts to write poetry.

#1

Finally

Finally
They met for real
After spending uncountable hours together on-line

Finally
They hugged
After having exchanged uncountable cyber hugs

Finally
They kissed
After having kissed uncountable times on-line

Finally
They found out how it was to spend time together in real life
After having talked about it uncountable times

Finally
They explored each others bodies
After having wondered uncountable times how it would feel

Finally
He found out that she was just as wonderful
In real life as she was on-line

 

[ShyGuy68]

#2

Love:
What is it?

Love:
You can't define it,
before you have experienced it!

Love:
When first you experience it.
then you know what it is.
But you still can't define it!

To be in love:
I think that I love her,
but I don't have the courage to tell her,
because I'm to shy,
and because I don't have the looks.
But I still feel
that I love her,
and that I'll never forget her,
because I think that she was my first
true love

 

[alildevilish]

Longfellow

nothing is holier in this lifetime of ours
than the first consciousness of love
the first rising sound and breath of that wind
which is so soon to sweep through the soul
to purify or distroy



all ive seen is how love distroys!

 

[Kitte]

Katie
by me

Tonight I hold you…
In the only arms I have left…

I hold you in my heart
Lay myself naked at your soul

Praying you won’t go…
I ask nothing of you but tonight

To fill the void…

To not hurt me
Hurt with me

To ache…

With me
Not because of me

To be alone with me
In the dark

For this moment…
That will last me forever…

 

[Camille]

Some of these aren't too bad. You guys do know there is a poetry forum? They are a cantankerous bunch over there but they could teach you a lot if you want to learn. I love hanging out with them.

Cam

 

[Tantanah]

When other lips and
other hearts...
their tale of woe shall tell
in language whose excess imparts
the power they feel so well..
there may perhaps
in such a scene
some recollection be
of days
that have as happy been..
and you'll remember me.

 

[alildevilish]

song






My pain is self-chosen
At least so the prophet says
I could either burn or cut off my pride and buy some time
A head full of lies is the weight tied to my waist
The river of deciet flows down
The only direction of flow is down
Down oh down
Down oh down
Down oh down
Down oh down
My pain is self-chosen
At least I believe it to be
I could either drown or pull of my skin and swim to shore
Now I can grow a beautifull shell for all to see
The river of deciet flows down
The only direction of flow is down
Down oh down
Down oh down
Down oh down
Down oh down
The pain is self-chosen
Our pain is self-chosen
Down oh down
Down oh down
Down oh down
Down oh down

 

[Avery_Chisholm]

My addition

Ode To JoE

Those big brown eyes

That jet black hair

Oh how I Woooooo each time you stare

I've LOVED you from upfront and from afar

I wish you'd realize that I could be your STAR

What will I be a whole ONE HUNDRED AND THREE

Before I hear oh LISA HOW I REALLLLLLLLLLLLY DO LOVE THEE!!!!

 

[Chuckus]

I wonder what it must be like to be in your shoes
Knowing of the things to come
Knowing of the trials not completed
The agony and anxiety it must bring
People always wanting to talk about it
Curiousity getting the best of them
Feeling like you are suffocating and being strangled in ways
I do not ask, just support
I give without thinking about any return
I do what I can when I can
I talk with you about our lives
We have grown closer over the years
Sometimes we did not see eye to eye
Yet we knew that we had each other through it all
Maybe we did not say it day in and day out
But we knew that blood is thicker than water
I have cried for your successes
I have cried and felt pain in your pain
Our lives have been different yet the same
We are independent yet interdependent
Strong and dependable almost painfully
Sometimes outspoken yet reasonable and unconditional
Few friends yet each and every one of them solid and like family
Talkative yet good listeners
We have shared similar experiences, almost ironically
The more we grow the more I realize how lucky I am
That I can have a relationship with my sister
Knowing full well that at any moment it could all disappear

 

[just pet]

I wrote this for a Literotican

At The Gates of Paradise

My sadness is knowing
I can never reach you
never touch you
never really be yours
Our lives and choices
separate us
We yearn
at the gates of Paradise
I see you
just beyond my reach
closer than my skin
farther than the stars
In that instant
when heart and heart
beat in perfect rhythm
eye to eye
fingertip to fingertip
the universe
ceased its opposition
and allowed two lovers
to feel something
so rare
so pure
so clear
that the sun
and the moon
were jealous
and eclipsed
the earth
with doubt

 

[Ms_Lilith]

You Don't Know the Half of it (A Little Taste of Heartbreak)

Oceans of tears fell from her Chasm-like eyes;
Pooling in a sea on the floor 'round her feet.
Whispy blonde tendrils dangle about her head
in a willow-like fashion.
Gnarled hands shake, broken by a lifetime's injustice,
and a choked cry escapes her lips.
All will be revealed;
Yes, in time, all will be revealed.

"Childlike" fear as she cowers in the corner;
No escape from his angry, monstrous fluidity.
Purple bruises- purple like dead flowers- form on pure skin:
markings of a non-existent whore.
Yet no cry will escape, she'll not make a sound.
All will be revealed;
Yes, all will be revealed.

Black night becomes light of day in corrupted innocence.
No makeup can cover the invisible scars she carresses;
Sheilding them to her breast: they are the only 'love' she's got,
Alone in a world of molestation.
A lonely sigh catches in her throat with tears.
All will be revealed;
You'll see- all will be revealed.
Through broken screams,
All will be revealed.

09.04.00, by vixenshe

 

[intrigued]

Re: I wrote this for a Literotican

At The Gates of Paradise

My sadness is knowing
I can never reach you
never touch you
never really be yours
Our lives and choices
separate us
We yearn
at the gates of Paradise
I see you
just beyond my reach
closer than my skin
farther than the stars
In that instant
when heart and heart
beat in perfect rhythm
eye to eye
fingertip to fingertip
the universe
ceased its opposition
and allowed two lovers
to feel something
so rare
so pure
so clear
that the sun
and the moon
were jealous
and eclipsed
the earth
with doubt

Very powerful, pet....and beautiful.

Connie

 

[Svedish_Chef]

Re: I wrote this for a Literotican

My sadness is knowing
I can never reach you
never touch you
never really be yours
Our lives and choices
separate us

Bugger, Its not me.

 

[Guest]

 

[just pet]

Re: Re: I wrote this for a Literotican

Bugger, Its not me.

I would love to get lost in those heavenly eyes and sensuous mouth, though...

Very powerful, pet....and beautiful.

Connie

Thank you, Connie

You should post your work here. It is outstanding.

 

[sufisaint]

here's one on the fly....

Just to feel
the sweetness of your breath
your words
your caresses
keeps this lonely bed
alive with hope...
For you are the one
my heart has waited for
been purified
by false love's pain....
And when we finally meet
you will understand why
with out a single word spoken
why I fall at your feet
with tears of joy..

 

[naudiz]

Charlie was a chemist,
But Charlie is no more.
What Charlie thought was H20
Was H2SO4.