Shameless Plug Time

[Jenny_Jackson]

"Holly's Grand Tour" has been out for a couple days. Guys probably won't like it because it's a "chick story".

But tell me what you think.

http://english.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=266767

 

[Matadore]

I have told you a bit of "what I think" of your story.

"Holly's Grand Tour" has been out for a couple days. Guys probably won't like it because it's a "chick story".

But tell me what you think.

Ok, Ms Jackson.

I commented on your story. If you would like to have more of my thoughts, PM me and I'll respond to any information you request...including what I liked about it. (My comment may seem pretty negative, but it is constructive.)

Matadore