shameless plea for feedback

[Guest]

I am doing a guest appearance at a writer's page on myspace. I will post there my latest blog. Any chance you guys would read it and tell me what you think?

It is about my flying lessons.

Just the latest entry, of course.

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[Guest]

pretty please?



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[Salvor-Hardon]

I just gave it a read.

For pilots or those with aviation familiarity, its a nice fun read ( I did a year at Embry Riddle so I claim a bit of familiarity). To a complete outsider it could be a bit rough on the synapses, trying to make sense of some of it while wondering about other bits. I do like the "to eat girls who don't do their pre-flight check right" bit

If its an aviation forum go for it and you'll be applauded. IF there are less than 5 pilots I'd suggest some of your other pieces that are more widely accessible.

My two cents.

 

[alyxen]

Not sure if this is too late, but it was OK to me (a non-pilot). The few things there I didn't recognize, I am assuming a pilot would. Just one quick edit update:

Perhaps this the motivation what was missing. I must progress.

Missing an 'is' I believe.

 

[Guest]

I just gave it a read.

For pilots or those with aviation familiarity, its a nice fun read ( I did a year at Embry Riddle so I claim a bit of familiarity). To a complete outsider it could be a bit rough on the synapses, trying to make sense of some of it while wondering about other bits. I do like the "to eat girls who don't do their pre-flight check right" bit

If its an aviation forum go for it and you'll be applauded. IF there are less than 5 pilots I'd suggest some of your other pieces that are more widely accessible.

My two cents.

Thanks for reading!

It is supposed to be a blog so... could you point out some of the places it could be improved?


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