Shadow in the Dark

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This is a fantasy that I sometimes enjoy. I would love to see somebody pick it up and turn it into a top notch story.

Four couples are sharing a cottage for the weekend. They all know each other from work or something, but it is the first time they have spent a weekend together.

The story would center around one couple, particularly the female. When they retire for the night, he is horny and wants to mess around. She is concerned that others would hear in nearby rooms and says no. They fall asleep with little or no clothes and on top of the covers because it is very hot that night.

In the middle of the night she is awaken by somebody licking her pussy. She assumes it is her horny husband, doesn't want to protest too much and it feels good so she spreads her legs to make it easier. That is when her foot touches her husband who is still lying next to her. Her mind starts racing, Who is eating my pussy? Should I stop them? What if my husband wakes up? It sure feels good! She tries to look but can only see a shadow in the darkness. This goes on until she cums. The shadow then moves up to the head of the bed and places a knee on either side of the woman. He wants me to suck is dick! What if my husband wakes up? She opens her mouth, sticks out her tongue and searches the darkness for his cock. After some suspense her tongue finds itself in the middle of a soggy wet cunt. Her mind continues racing, I have never eaten another woman before, Oh my god she just ate my pussy and I came. She notices the smell and taste and mentally compares it to her own pussy. Gradually she gets more and more into it and ends up really sucking her off. Just as the shadow figure is about to come and large wad of semen runs out of her pussy and into the womans mouth. Oh my god she was fucked before she came in hear and started eating me. Who fucked her? She laps up all the semen and the shadow finishes her orgasm and quietly leaves the room.

The woman is so turned on by the whole thing that she leans over and starts sucking her husbands dick, who is still sleeping next to her. When he is hard she climbs on top of him, slowly lowers herself onto his dick and whispers every detail of what just happen into his ear.


This is a rough sketch. Hope somebody likes this enough to develop it into a great story.
 
This is a great idea, and I'm surprised you haven't written the story yourself. It sounds like you have almost all of it worked out. Has anyone else jumped on this? If not, I'll take it up.
 
Flashlight7.5,
Just curious if anything was taking place with this story. Have you changed your mind or are you still working on this. I have been watching the new releases but haven't seen anything from you. I have read some of your other stuff and think you are a good writer. Just curious!!
 
Sorry about that I just read your latest post more closely and see that you are in fact working on this. Thats Great!! Looking forward to reading your version!!

I imagined a lot of psychological struggle in the womens mind as her body kept responding when her mind was telling her no, etc.
 
I just submitted this story. It cries for a sequel or two, but I'm going to work on a couple other projects first. Let me know what you think of it. I must say that you made it very tricky by requesting FOUR couples. That's eight libidos to keep track of!
 
Great Job Flashlight!

I see what you mean by a possible sequel. Perhaps the second story could be the same day through the eyes of Gail. We could find out how she got her pussy filled with cum. Is it Robs or one of the other guys that she visited prior to her encounter with Lara? And then of course relive the encounter with Lara but from Gails perspective.

The third story could then be with Lara confronting Gail.

Anyway even if you leave it at the one story it was a great job. Will be looking forward to more stories from you. Hope you do something with the "Ex-Girlfriend" idea.
 
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