Cum_Inside
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This story deals with morally corrupt characters and plentiful discussion of rape, domestic abuse and very unhealthy relationships. Please be warned — nothing about this story is a feel good tale; really, it’s exactly the opposite. Dark, gritty, and horrifying in places. If these topics do not warn you away, I hope you enjoy the ride.
Erin Adler leaned against the nursing station desk while she waited for the physician to finish her assessment in bed E. Five hours after the brutal assault of Hannah Ricketts, Erin was the detective responsible for making sure the police force had all the details surrounding the attack. She’d been working on this case for months now.
Hannah so far had seemed quite reticent and in no mood to cooperate, but that may have been thanks the extreme distrust she’d developed following the incident; with a deep, blackened circle around her left eye and multiple lacerations to the skin of her cheeks, arms and hips along with finger-shaped bruises all over her torso, Hannah looked like quite the sight. Erin hadn’t had a chance to see the pictures of how bad the damage was below the belt quite yet, but the rape kit was being processed and soon enough Erin would know.
She’d know if it had been him.
Although she was pretty certain, the only conclusive way they’d be able to make the connection would be for DNA to finally be left behind or for Hannah to positively identify her attacker. The chance was slim but Erin wasn’t planning on giving up now. There were missing pieces to the puzzle but if they just had one good break those pieces would fall into place quickly.
The eighteen year-old brunette was the ninth case in the serial rapes of pretty teenage girls. There had been no leads up until the last victim, but slowly the story was being put together; multiple women consistently reporting the same physical characteristics, habits, etc. The assailant had been smart, never leaving a single trace. None of them described seeing his face, but they’d been able to give an approximation of his size based on the weight of his body forcing them into the dirt or against a darkened alleyway wall. There was no trace of who this guy was.
Up until now.
Hannah had told the responding officers that he’d bitten her before the case got passed over to Erin, but this was a departure from his usual MO. Hopefully teeth marks or salivary residue might give them the jumpstart they needed.
For five months he’d been always just beyond reach but there was suddenly some hope that she might be able to catch him.
Every victim was more brutal than the last and it was clear he was gaining comfort and learning. Practicing. Perfecting.
But talking about such a topic as though “perfecting” was an appropriate word felt wrong. Still, there was no other way to describe what was happening. Their perp was getting more and more savvy during each attack with less chance to find any evidence of his identity. Initially, the rapes had been in more public locations with sloppy clean-up even if it had been enough to narrowly escape any repercussions. Now, although victims were being taken in places that were still public, they were clearly planned well in the fact that there was not one person that had seen or heard anything and usually there was no semen, saliva, or the assailiant’s blood despite one of the girls potentially attempting to fight back.
Whoever he was, he was learning.
It had raised the hackles of the community and the police force in turn, but Erin had always had a morbid curiosity about these types of things; what drove a man to this?
She’d been on his tail since day one and she hoped that she’d get the chance to stare the sick son of a bitch down and ask him exactly what the fuck he was thinking about as he destroyed those girls - because other than the physical trauma there was underlying psychological shock there, too.
****
Dr. Grenier stepped out of Hannah’s room and walked purposefully towards Erin. Her expression was grim.
“Officer. I’d hoped that I wouldn’t be seeing you so soon.”
Erin raised one perfectly manicured blonde eyebrow and pushed herself away from the desk casually.
“Yeah, well, it’s not like I planned to see two rapes this week, doc. In this small town, well, one every five years is more than enough for me. But it’s only the tenth today and I’m dreading what the rest of the month will bring.”
Erin tilted her head, peering past Dr. Grenier with a frown.
“She up for visitors? You know that I need to ask her some questions. Plus I hear there may be some DNA.”
Dr. Grenier reached out and placed one hand on Erin’s arm. Her squeeze was firm but not painful, and the look she levelled Erin with was supposed to be a warning. It didn’t phase Erin in the least.
“We took a swab for you when we were cleaning her up. If you’re going to ask her, fine, but please… Erin, be easy on her, eh? Don’t interrogate the poor girl,” she demanded with a click of her tongue that promised vengeance if the cop didn’t listen.
Erin rolled her eyes.
“Oh, c’mon, Rachel. You know me,” here, she smiled a toothy grin. “I’m always on my best behaviour. Promise.”
Rachel Grenier laughed incredulously. “You? Bullshit! Speak to Natalie on the way by the desk and she’ll give you the swab. I mean it, Erin. The second I hear a peep out of her it will be time for you to go.”
***
Erin knocked gently on the door to 260-E three times before she peaked her head into the room.
“Hannah? I’m sorry to bother you. I’m detective Adler. I need to ask you a few questions about the attack but I understand if it’s still a bit too sensitive. I promise this will be quick and I’ll make it as simple as possible. Is that okay?”
Hannah, curled up in the bed with her knees to her chest, dark brown hair fanning out over the pillow with a landmark of bruising covering her face and shoulders under the thin paper gown, looked nothing short of pitiful. Erin fought her snort, doing her best to maintain an empathetic expression.
Hannah had been through trauma but Erin needed to cover ground quickly here to ensure that he couldn’t slip free of her again; she was so close.
Hannah sat up slowly, eyes wary, but her tone was aggressive, anything but the passive way she’d appeared initially. There was fire in Hannah as Erin had predicted: it seemed to be a common character trait among the victims that they had a bit of spunk. That didn’t matter — none of them had been strong enough to fight him off. There were no skin cells or blood underneath any of their fingernails.
But there was a very well defined set of teeth marks buried into the pale flesh where Hannah’s neck curved into the span of her shoulders, albeit shallow, but there regardless. Erin’s heart leapt and then dropped into her stomach. She tried not to let her excitement show through. Maybe a DNA match would be possible after all.
“I suppose that would be okay, but I’ve already been through this with the nurse and the doctor and…” said Hannah, blowing out a frustrated breath. “Whatever. I get it. It doesn’t mean I like it. Let’s just get this over with, please. I’m ready for this day to be over with already.”
Story of my life thought Erin, nodding sombrely as she gingerly perched on the edge of an old wooden chair next to the bed.
“Can you tell me about...”
****
Erin didn’t sleep that night; she was too busy waiting on the call where she was given a name from the saliva sample.
It all seemed too good to be true.
A break.
Finally.
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