Sex Wars

[Xander]

All right. Sex Wars is up.
As usual I'm nerveous about a new story and I would love to get some feedback on it.

I'm in top 20?????????
*mouth open and looking really stupid*

 

[Crystal]

Hi Xander!
I thought your story was really fun and I enjoyed it a lot. It is so important that people keep coming up with original ideas and this is certainly one of them. The storyline that you have developped is ideal for you to exapnd on the idea - so I will be expecting several more chapters out of you - do you hear me my bitch!!!

Well done lovely - I'm becoming quite fond of your stories!

Love
Crystal
xx



[This message has been edited by crystal (edited 02-10-2000).]

 

[Xander]

Thank's Crystal....shit! that wasen't it.
Th..th..thank y..yo..you ma...ma..ma..master.

Sex Wars has developed into a large story, so yes. There will be more.

 

[Havocman]

Kudos Xander,

An excellent read, and an interesting topic...thoroughly enjoyed it *glancing nervously around, watching out for 336*

Havoc

 

[Hornytoad]

Can't wait for the next part of it Zander, first part was great.

 

[Dakota Ryan]

Great story.... and I would think it may even be true in the future....LOL.... sure glad I live I live now...hahahaha.... well writen and great story line... can't wait for the next chapter...

 

[English Bob]

Hi Xander

Excellent story

I agree with crystal - it's very important that writers keep coming up with new ideas.

Looking forward to reading more

 

[Xander]

Thank you all for the kind words. I must admit the respons to Sex Wars has taken me totally by surprise.
I go WOW, everytime I logon to my mail. And here.
Thank's again all.

 

[Sammyjo]

Xander...sorry I got disconnected from you, my ICQ isn't working properly...talk to you soon!!!

 

[Xander]

You bet ya' Sammy.
And it's still not a prob. Those times you disappear I kinda figure that it's you 'puter acting up. I will be waiting for the next time you pop up on my screen.
See Ya'

 

[Dakota Ryan]

Great job.... I loved the story-line, it could happen...LOL...I to am becoming a fan of your work and look forward to your next post with part 2 real soon I hope.

 

[Gary1]

Great story .... very innovative and creative. more please????!!!!