Sex Train

[Matt Twattingle]

Unsuspeting passengers board an Orient Express Type train. The mystery is not a murder.

The mystery is that they are going to get sucked and fucked by the train attendents and other passengers

There are some compartments and some open seating

There is television but it shows other passenger areas with channels to surf around

The attendants and waiters first appear in conservative attire but as the day progress their attire becomes more erotic

the passengers don't all get it at the same time it progesses from room to room and seat to seat.

some are shocked some are stimulated

The waiters keep offering towlettes with little tongs to the passengers.

What do you think?

 

[sirhugs]

interesting challenging idea. would be a long story. needs to be weell written .

 

[Matt Twattingle]

Train

I was thinking of a role player format or an anthology. The story would consist of individual viewpoints. One would be an innocent girl (18 of course). Another could be a Young male. An older unmarried female. Several couples of different ages. Each would have their own story and awakinging.

 

[silversword]

lots of possibilities

Fantastic idea, like you say it has the potential for a number of interlinked stories.

A few scenes for discussion:

Father travelling with his daughter (the innocent 18 year old) father is seduced by female attendant, then gets daughter to join in, could leave it to female-female or add an incest angle and get father daugther or the female attendant links the daughter up with somebody else.

Older woman (late thirties early forties) tired of her boring husband decides to have a little fun. Travels up and down the train having encounter with numerous men. Possibly even the driver/engineer - if you make it a steam train.

Slight historical tint, long dresses corsets, heaving bosoms...

Orient Express has the possibility for failure of lights, long tunnels etc...

Also wandering hands under the dinner tables, you know how close the seats are together on the train.

just a few suggestions

 

[Matt Twattingle]

sex Train

Great Ideas to spice it up. I had not even thought of some of them!.

I think the key to success of this story would be brief but compelling character development. Were not talking Charles Dickens here. Readers must be attached or attracted to the characters. Perhaps the passengers are selected for the "Sexpress" because they are repressed?

They all share a common physician a, "freudlike" psychiatrist.
It is not an accident that they are on the train. Perhaps the destination is a resort sanatorium. They are unwittingly duped into booking passage on the same train. Perhaps the seating has bee arranged in advance.

The buildup of sexual tension progressing to hidden sexual activty and culminates in a complete and total loss of inhibition.

You and I think alike about the costume stuff. All those petticoats to search through,

It must have been a real treat when you found something wet and warm.

 

[nightnurse]

i love your story idea matt..turned me on just thinking about it

mmmm the incest aspect would spoil it........not everyones into that

 

[Matt Twattingle]

The atmosphere in the train could be laced with erotic Pheremones.

Also the teas that are served by the attendents have aphrodesiac
qualities in them.

As the train clacks it's way down the tracks Sarah a young widow traveling in a car with a male stranger begins to feel uncomfortable and warm.

The stranger is attracted to her. He normally does not get an erection just sitting in a train but he is hard and is trying to disguise his condition.

 

[BlackSnake]

Re: Train

...One would be an innocent girl (18 of course). Another could be a Young male...

This is a layover from the Author's forum: Forget the age of the young girl and guy and let the readers decide how old they maybe, because realisticly, there are very few if any innocent 18 year olds.

I love the idea. If you take it as a role playing idea, it may give you more material (i.e., view points) for your story.

I can't wait to read the story. Great idea.

 

[Matt Twattingle]

sex Train

I like the costume and period things intermingled. How about if the train goes into a time travel thing when it enters the Tunnel. The Girl finds herself in the arms of Cassanova at a candlelit ball in Venice. They rush into a foggy night and into a gondola he flatters her and pets her they kiss and pet. He plays with her skirts and probes for her pussy.

When she is at that point of no return the train exits the tunnel and into the present. Instead of awaking from a dream her erotic dream is real.

Just as she is about to feel guild the Helpful attendent comes by and matter of factly offers her a towelette with the pair of tongs.
Everything is Ok just as it should be.

 

[silversword]

Interesting twist on the original idea.

Could combined your idea of the pheromones and have it so that some of the passengers fall asleep and dream about erotic situations only to wake to find the characters in the dreams are infact passengers on the train.

silver