Sex for Thought - Looking for a mind stimulating read?

[nofilter_davira]

Hello Everyone,
I'm new to the Literotica community. I was interested in getting your feedback on my stories posted under my profile. Please leave a comment if you enjoy them. I will be migrating some more on this site within the next few weeks.

Let me know if I tantalized your senses! I challenge you not to be stimulated when you read my blog.

Thanks!

 

[nofilter_davira]

http://www.literotica.com/s/me-myself-and-goldie
http://www.literotica.com/s/a-steamy-escapade

 

[slyc_willie]

Well, there were quite a few punctuation errors in both vignettes, and large blocks of text can be difficult to read. I suggest cutting it down some and breaking the narrative into smaller blocks.