KindredFlame
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I have always loved the classic fairy tale. Cinderella, Snow White, The Little Mermaid. So I started to play with the idea of a slant on Snow White. My idea is a role reversal where the dwarfs are women of high rank. And Snow White is a man, thinking along the lines of John Snow,
I am very much in the planning stage of the story and my vision is that The male snow is used and abused by all of the women, however falls in love with the mother.
So I set out the profiles of the women and here they are, loosely based on real people, but I am not sure what to do next.
Any input would be welcome.
Once upon a time deep in the Białowieża Forest there was a castle. In the castle lived Duke Casimir and his loverly wife the Duchess Agnieszka of Białowieża.
Agnieszka was beautiful and she was loved by all the people of the realm.
Between them they had seven daughters two sets of twins and one set of triplets there was to be a son but this child died shortly after the child’s birth and the duchess was unable to conceive again, after this unfortunate event.
Rumours soon spread around the realm that the midwife was a witch and she had caused the death of the child. She was hounded by the people of Białowieża. No longer being able to help bring life and joy into people’s life’s she fled deep into the forests of Białowieża where she became warped and twisted by the torments of her mind, gradually becoming the witch that she was once accused of being.
The princesses grew to becoming beautiful young lady’s, but each of them had very different characteristic. The oldest, by thirty minutes, was Karolina was a fighter she had the nickname of Grumpy as she was always in trouble and getting into fights mostly with boys who tried to take advantage. She was beautiful 160cm tall with a slender body and light brown hair that glowed in the sunlight. Just a glance from her blue/grey eyes turned men to jelly but her temper always kept them at arms length. Alexia was the second oldest, she also was slender in build and was slightly taller than Karolina at 165cm with jet black hair that gave her a look of coldness, however her heart was warm and loving very much like her mother. Alexia was troubled by her looks, her dark brown eyes looked like deep pools of water and her unblemished skin enticed boys to her side. Alexia was a loving person and was giving she always was the first to help anyone and was studying medicine in the hope she could always have the knowledge to heal people, most people thought this is why her the nickname was Doc, but the name came really from all the time when she nursed sick animals back to life when she was younger and the name stuck.
The second pair were Diane and Elaine. Both 160cm tall and were identical with blue eyes and blonde hair that glimmered in the sunlight or in the rain they were both stunning looking they grew up in the shadow of there older siblings but they had their own power with there stunning looks they made there own way in the world becoming actors though some of the movies did bring shame on themselves. They had endless stream of suitors and would often share lovers so there experiences were entwined. All in all Diane and Elaine were the black sheep of the family but the people of Białowieża loved them but there conduct gave them the nicknames of Happy and Sleazy but they didn’t care.
The triplets were the youngest they were always teased and bullied by there older sisters but they grew up to be caring and loving. Sleepy, Dopey and Bashful were there nicknames Alexandra Monica and Izabela were there real names there long blonde hair and brown eyes made them the most beautiful of the family and the older siblings were always jealous of the triplets.
While growing up the triplets were always together and protected each other, there love of music led them to form a band and performs all over the world with there quirky style.
It was Agnieszka’s 44th birthday and a grand party was planned.
I am very much in the planning stage of the story and my vision is that The male snow is used and abused by all of the women, however falls in love with the mother.
So I set out the profiles of the women and here they are, loosely based on real people, but I am not sure what to do next.
Any input would be welcome.
Once upon a time deep in the Białowieża Forest there was a castle. In the castle lived Duke Casimir and his loverly wife the Duchess Agnieszka of Białowieża.
Agnieszka was beautiful and she was loved by all the people of the realm.
Between them they had seven daughters two sets of twins and one set of triplets there was to be a son but this child died shortly after the child’s birth and the duchess was unable to conceive again, after this unfortunate event.
Rumours soon spread around the realm that the midwife was a witch and she had caused the death of the child. She was hounded by the people of Białowieża. No longer being able to help bring life and joy into people’s life’s she fled deep into the forests of Białowieża where she became warped and twisted by the torments of her mind, gradually becoming the witch that she was once accused of being.
The princesses grew to becoming beautiful young lady’s, but each of them had very different characteristic. The oldest, by thirty minutes, was Karolina was a fighter she had the nickname of Grumpy as she was always in trouble and getting into fights mostly with boys who tried to take advantage. She was beautiful 160cm tall with a slender body and light brown hair that glowed in the sunlight. Just a glance from her blue/grey eyes turned men to jelly but her temper always kept them at arms length. Alexia was the second oldest, she also was slender in build and was slightly taller than Karolina at 165cm with jet black hair that gave her a look of coldness, however her heart was warm and loving very much like her mother. Alexia was troubled by her looks, her dark brown eyes looked like deep pools of water and her unblemished skin enticed boys to her side. Alexia was a loving person and was giving she always was the first to help anyone and was studying medicine in the hope she could always have the knowledge to heal people, most people thought this is why her the nickname was Doc, but the name came really from all the time when she nursed sick animals back to life when she was younger and the name stuck.
The second pair were Diane and Elaine. Both 160cm tall and were identical with blue eyes and blonde hair that glimmered in the sunlight or in the rain they were both stunning looking they grew up in the shadow of there older siblings but they had their own power with there stunning looks they made there own way in the world becoming actors though some of the movies did bring shame on themselves. They had endless stream of suitors and would often share lovers so there experiences were entwined. All in all Diane and Elaine were the black sheep of the family but the people of Białowieża loved them but there conduct gave them the nicknames of Happy and Sleazy but they didn’t care.
The triplets were the youngest they were always teased and bullied by there older sisters but they grew up to be caring and loving. Sleepy, Dopey and Bashful were there nicknames Alexandra Monica and Izabela were there real names there long blonde hair and brown eyes made them the most beautiful of the family and the older siblings were always jealous of the triplets.
While growing up the triplets were always together and protected each other, there love of music led them to form a band and performs all over the world with there quirky style.
It was Agnieszka’s 44th birthday and a grand party was planned.
