Series feedback requested.

[Choices101]

Hello all. i am relatively new to this place, as a writer anyway. I just completed the first series, Choices and would love feedback on the story as a whole. i know some of the chapters have spelling and Grammar mistakes, i have never been good with those two things so i would request that be overlooked.

I would like to know what you think of the overall tale. Where did it excell in your opinion and where did it lack? Things like that.

Thank you to anyone who commented on the stories directly and thank you to anyone who offers feedback here.

I can be found here, with a link to all 5 chapters.

http://www.literotica.com/stories/memberpage.php?uid=1365371&page=submissions

 

[Choices101]

Still looking for feedback

just a bump, to see if anyone can give some feedback. I am looking to do a second follow up series, and was curious what people thought of the first one. Plot, characters, anything that they might like to see in a follow up series.

Thank you all

Choices101