If anyone may read my stories for feedback, there is a temporary misfit, mostly in sequel sequencing.
Two stories have been in the Literotica collection for about a year, "Bar 69: True Story," and "After Bar 69: True Story."
http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=20661
http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=20662
I rewrote them to fit added sequels titled "On-Camera After Bar 69" (sent, but not yet posted) and another story now posted "Black Sex Party." The latter is at:
http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=47450
The stories pretty well stand by themselves, but there may temporarily seem to be a gap in the theme.
The same may be true of another serial. A new version of "Interracial Anilingus" is up:
http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=47453
But the old version of its sequel, "Interracial Anilingus: Ch 2" is still up, with old characters and scenes. It could be confusing, but probably will not be so to all you sharp Literotica readers. Feedback is always welcome, bad, or, preferably, good. Nudemodel
Two stories have been in the Literotica collection for about a year, "Bar 69: True Story," and "After Bar 69: True Story."
http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=20661
http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=20662
I rewrote them to fit added sequels titled "On-Camera After Bar 69" (sent, but not yet posted) and another story now posted "Black Sex Party." The latter is at:
http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=47450
The stories pretty well stand by themselves, but there may temporarily seem to be a gap in the theme.
The same may be true of another serial. A new version of "Interracial Anilingus" is up:
http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=47453
But the old version of its sequel, "Interracial Anilingus: Ch 2" is still up, with old characters and scenes. It could be confusing, but probably will not be so to all you sharp Literotica readers. Feedback is always welcome, bad, or, preferably, good. Nudemodel
