Sensual/erotic Massage

[wouldloveto]

I have searched the archives of this forum, read a ton of massage stories, and have a ton of fantasies about this subject.
What I have not found is the balance between outrageous sexual encounters and a plausible situation that I am seeking.

This one comes close: https://www.literotica.com/s/massage-therapy-experience
As I read the first page of this story I thought, finally the story I seek. The author did a wonderful job on the whole story IMO, and I did enjoy it. But, what is in my head is something a bit more subtle, sensual, possibly unintentional...

Can anyone point me to such a story?
Or, can someone help coach me to write my own. I submitted a couple of stories here years ago, but neither are very good since I am not really a writer, but I have been trying to write more again lately.

Thanks to all in advance.
Cheers!

 

[TanSurferGirl]

I have searched the archives of this forum, read a ton of massage stories, and have a ton of fantasies about this subject.
What I have not found is the balance between outrageous sexual encounters and a plausible situation that I am seeking.

This one comes close: https://www.literotica.com/s/massage-therapy-experience
As I read the first page of this story I thought, finally the story I seek. The author did a wonderful job on the whole story IMO, and I did enjoy it. But, what is in my head is something a bit more subtle, sensual, possibly unintentional...

Can anyone point me to such a story?
Or, can someone help coach me to write my own. I submitted a couple of stories here years ago, but neither are very good since I am not really a writer, but I have been trying to write more again lately.

Thanks to all in advance.
Cheers!

So many massage sex videos are great!

 

[wouldloveto]

So many massage sex videos are great!

Tis true, but stories can be so much better...

 

[TanSurferGirl]

I need to be a better reader lol

 

[Winchester3030]

I always check the story tags for massage stories it’s one of biggest fantasies!

 

[TanSurferGirl]

hot

 

[Winchester3030]

I need to be a better reader lol

It will only take one or two and you will be wanting to read them all lol

 

[TanSurferGirl]

I am not a patient person

 

[wouldloveto]

I am not a patient person

hmmm... possibilities are coming to mind...

 

[TanSurferGirl]

like what

 

[StillStunned]

I don't know whether either of these is what you're looking for, but here they are:

The Code
Flesh for a Third Fantasy

 

[wouldloveto]

PM?

 

[TanSurferGirl]

hilltop surprise is what?

 

[wouldloveto]

I don't know whether either of these is what you're looking for, but here they are:

The Code
Flesh for a Third Fantasy

Very nice stories indeed, but not quite what I am after. I am struggling writing my own, but a prolific author like yourself might be able to give me some pointers.

 

[StillStunned]

hilltop surprise is what?

If you're referring to Full Moon on Old Jack's Hill in my signature, it's a voyeur story with supernatural elements. "A midnight wanderer stumbles upon a coven of witches." 5000 words, rated 4.64.

Very nice stories indeed, but not quite what I am after. I am struggling writing my own, but a prolific author like yourself might be able to give me some pointers.

If you want to write sensual and erotic, the key is to take things slowly. Picture the story in your mind, with all its elements, then take a deep breath and slow down. Don't be in a hurry to get anywhere. Enjoy the journey - that's what your readers have come for, not the destination. Show them every sensation: sight, touch, taste, scent, sound. Savour it all.

Imagine making love to your partner on a lazy Sunday morning with nowhere to go and no-one to interrupt you, so you can connect on an emotional level. And now turn that into words. Let your reader experience everything that you'd experience in that situation.

Draw it out, let it build up, so that when you finally get to the end your reader can barely hold back.

 

[rjhsteel]

Love the idea of watching the wife receive a erotic massage. Love stories and videos with a slow build up.

 

[SoCalAshley]

What you are asking is difficult because, contrary to popular belief, very few, if any, spas with licensed massage therapists will give you a happy-ending massage.

The story I wrote takes place in the apartment of a “very good friend." It’s a lesbian massage story. If you are interested, here is the link:

https://www.literotica.com/s/heather-ch-06-1

 

[wouldloveto]

SoCalAshley: Agreed, it is very unlikely to happen in a reputable spa. That is what makes my fantasy, and real like search, so compelling. And I am looking forward to your story, but...

I think I flashed on an idea worth trying to write about. I would be from both points of view, that of the masseuse and the client.

I have never written from the female point of view besides little snippets, and I am not happy with much of my past writing efforts, but I'm gonna give this a shot.

 

[Britva415]

it is very unlikely to happen in a reputable spa. That is what makes my fantasy, and real like search, so compelling

What “real life search?” I hope you aren’t visiting legit massage therapists in bad faith with the intention of “seducing” them into pleasing you inappropriately.

 

[wouldloveto]

What “real life search?” I hope you aren’t visiting legit massage therapists in bad faith with the intention of “seducing” them into pleasing you inappropriately.

Nope, I don't think I have articulated myself well enough if you got that out of it. Does not bode well for my writing skills I guess.

However, I was not aware that you were the morality police here.

 

[Britva415]

Nope, I don't think I have articulated myself well enough if you got that out of it. Does not bode well for my writing skills I guess.

However, I was not aware that you were the morality police here.

We don’t have to be on the same page about morality, you and me, Especially if that wasn’t what you meant in the first place.

So what is the real life search?

 

[wouldloveto]

The real life search is the perfect masseuse, sensual and erotic without any promise or expectation of relief, and I am well aware that is not gonna happen at a Message Envy. The details of how that might occur are more complicated in real life than they are in my fantasies.

 

[TheWritingGroup]

I thought I'd mention that massage with a happy ending is perfectly legal in Japan, from what I've read. (I've never been there.) Only intercourse, penis entering stuff, is illegal for pay in Japan.

-Annie

 

[wouldloveto]

Happy ending massages are not what I am talking about here, they are easy to find and usually pretty boring.

 

[Rob_Royale]

But, what is in my head is something a bit more subtle, sensual, possibly unintentional...

That does sound good. A slow burn story.

Male masseuse and female client. They are both wildly attracted to one another but they must stay within the boundaries of professionalism and propriety. Perhaps it's in a very class based society and they are both from decent classes.

She's recovering after an auto accident and she spends an hour with a physical therapist and then an hour with a masseuse. She get along very well. They chat politely, and he keeps things totally professional. Over time they get to know each other. She's a married woman in a loveless but not unhappy marriage. He's a college student working towards a sports medicine degree.

After a few weeks, she's very attracted to him and she dreams of him touching her ... inappropriately. He dreams of her asking for such, both knowing it will never happen.

Until as her health improves she's talking with some of her high-society friends who suggest a home spa day. Since she has a pool and a hot tub, they decide to hire a masseuse and a mani/pedicurist to come out to the house and they sit around a drink mimosas and get pampered. So to that end she asks our MMC if he'd like the job.

He could definitely use the money and readily agrees. At the woman's home he gets to work until he gets to our FMC's friend who is rather bold and randy. Since they aren't in a professional setting, she asks for a happy ending. Our MMC has done this before in a private setting and happy agrees.

Our FMC is walking past the closed door to hear her friend moaning. Intrigued, she eases the door open and sees her friend doing things she's dreamed of doing.

Writing out the dreams they have each had, keep things spicy as the story progresses, as does their admiration of each others bodies. Perhaps they start to realize that they might be falling in love. When she sees him with her friend she's angry and jealous and she locks herself in her room and cries.

She later accosts him and she's very angry and she gets closer and closer as she yells at him until they are nearly nose to nose and suddenly she's kissing him wildly. They grab each other tightly and kiss like lost loves. "I want you all to myself," she whispers. "Forever."

They look into each other's eyes. "I love you, too." he replies softly.