Seeking resources that relate common emotes through action or expression

Nexte100

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"Arched brows", "narrowed eyes", "shrugged", etc. Better than describing the emotion, they connect with the reader on a more visceral level, IMO. Not that I necessarily agree with the "show, don't tell" axiom, but here I believe it holds true. Many times I'm looking for a particular emotion or reaction to a situation, and feel like I'm bungling the describing action.

Does anyone have a resource that lists these out, at least as suggestions? E.g. surprised = "eyes wide, he drew back"; angry = "her eyes narrowed...", and so forth.
 
"Arched brows", "narrowed eyes", "shrugged", etc. Better than describing the emotion, they connect with the reader on a more visceral level, IMO. Not that I necessarily agree with the "show, don't tell" axiom, but here I believe it holds true. Many times I'm looking for a particular emotion or reaction to a situation, and feel like I'm bungling the describing action.

Does anyone have a resource that lists these out, at least as suggestions? E.g. surprised = "eyes wide, he drew back"; angry = "her eyes narrowed...", and so forth.

I just found it. The Internet really does have everything. This looks just like what you are looking for:

https://writerswrite.co.za/cheat-sheets-for-writing-body-language/
 
Their sphincters puckered. "Oh no, not now!" they spewed fruitlessly.
 
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