Seeking feedback on a series/latest entry of mine

[Just_Somebodys_Husband]

Good evening everyone,

I've been trying to figure out if it's just the crowd of people that disapprove of wife sharing or my writing in general, but based on scores of other stories posted the same day that scores considerably better despite being error laden it feels obvious to me.

I've written a four part series about a husband and wife who find themselves exploring with a third. There's a bit of conflict, drama and a few twists and turns and while I'm sure it's not a flawless work, it doesn't feel like sub three star content either.

It might just be that it's posted in LW and that I didn't immediately have the husband divorce the wife or seek revenge on another man, it might be that I'm missing the bigger picture, or maybe my stories really are garbage.

The longer feedback comments I get have been fairly nice, I've had some lovely feedback sent privately, but I've also gotten some fairly nasty comments too. Any feedback you can offer would be greatly appreciated.

https://www.literotica.com/series/se/the-tease

 

[OnlyHappyEndings]

I love sharing and cheating stories so I will check these out but it will take me a while to get there. Not sure how LW became what it is but I recommend ignoring any feedback that is only complaints about the content. Your stories are yours to tell and you will find readers if the stories are good.