Seeking Feedback From Women

[Oasis690]

I am seeking feedback from women on my new story, "A Night To Remember," under Erotic Couplings. I think the story is pretty hot, and I would like to find out what women think. What would YOU like to see in it, or in a story in general? Does my story flow along nicely? Is it too long/short? Is there too much/too little sex? Please tell me, I want to write stories that women enjoy...especially stories that make them horny. I'm waiting to hear from you.

Here is a link to my stories/profile: http://literotica.com/stories/memberpage.php?uid=49694

You can email me at oasis690@excite.com if you prefer to send comments there