Seeking Feedback from a Mom for Next Chapter of Taboo Story

[YoungAndVeryRestless]

Hey,

I recently wrote a story that I truly did not expect to write (http://www.literotica.com/s/thanksgiving-weekend-ch-01) and I'm considering following it up with more installations. If there are any older women, or mothers, who are into these kind of mother-son stories and wish to give me feedback on some ideas so I can make it a little more authentic, I'd greatly appreciate it.

Feel free to PM me and we can talk privately, or if you'd like to e-mail, that works too.

Thanks!

(And I welcome notes on the story itself).

 

[YoungAndVeryRestless]

Thanks to those who sent me PMs. I'd just like to re-iterate, I'm mainly looking for women, just to make sure it all sounds authentic (and, sue me, I'm a straight guy, I love women). I do appreciate all the kind remarks though.

(A stealth bump)

 

[sr71plt]

If you play an angle like this for cougar cybersex contact, you have to take whoever shows up, ya know.

 

[YoungAndVeryRestless]

If you play an angle like this for cougar cybersex contact, you have to take whoever shows up, ya know.

Ha, no, I'm not complaining. I just had a few replies from men offering their advice, and while I appreciate the enthusiasm (they read the story!), I'm mainly just looking for women.

 

[elfin_odalisque]

Thanks to those who sent me PMs. I'd just like to re-iterate, I'm mainly looking for women, just to make sure it all sounds authentic (and, sue me, I'm a straight guy, I love women). I do appreciate all the kind remarks though.

(A stealth bump)

For all your silly talk, I think sr's marked your card pretty well.