Seeking feedback for incest story

[MzDeviancy]

I feel like it's going along well, but I want to make sure it's set up in a believable way. And the other usual issues, like if any crap grammar jumps out at you, or stilted dialogue, etc., I'd also like to hear about that.

If you're interested, PM me and I'll send you the doc.

 

[57chevy]

about editing

i am able to edit your story please let me know