NaughteeDragon
Hiring Maidens
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- Jul 25, 2022
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I am currently 90k words deep in a 125k to 150k story. My technical grammar is solid. I am mostly looking for someone that will give me feedback on character development and improving foreshadowing. Would prefer a female editor as my primary concern is making sure my female leads are believable and realistic.
Kaitlyn was 9 when her parents divorced and it devastated her. The siblings next door “adopted” her and she clung to them in her desperation. Ten years later she and Cecilia are closer than sisters and everyone knows that she and Allen will get married sooner rather than later. In her desperation to keep them close she has opened a romantic triangle, but what she has now is more than she expected and she’s struggling to hold it all together.
Kaitlyn was 9 when her parents divorced and it devastated her. The siblings next door “adopted” her and she clung to them in her desperation. Ten years later she and Cecilia are closer than sisters and everyone knows that she and Allen will get married sooner rather than later. In her desperation to keep them close she has opened a romantic triangle, but what she has now is more than she expected and she’s struggling to hold it all together.
