This story is a bit out of the ordinary, but I believe it's appropriate for Literotica.
Synopsis: A married professional woman has been meeting a man from time to time on her lunch hours. An unknown extortionist has taken pictures and threatens to send them to her husband if she doesn't comply with his demands, essentially, sex and money.
So far, this may look like a very old, shopworn theme. The real goal of this story, however, is quite different from what the synopsis suggests. If it is successful, the reader will be led to follow characters through the development of the plot with an entirely mistaken perception of them which is resolved at the end. Throughout there are interactions between them and some other red herrings which support the intended, incorrect conclusion. To avoid giving it away I'll stop here until someone is interested and has a chance to read the rough version. If preferred, I can create an outline. I believe it's best to follow the path the eventual reader will take before knowing the ending twist.
The main erotic thread of the story revolves around the main progagonist's effort, with the help of others, to hold the extortionist's interest in sex (at first, virtually, via Internet communication) as long as possible, thereby to gain time to find and deal with him, and also to delay demands for anything else, this by delivering a carefully calculated trickle of sexual enticements to the criminal while not falling short of his demands altogether. Over the course of the story, that character, with the others, ventures into some new ground, some of which actually turns positive. One example is the extortionist's demands for some exhibitonism which, after all is said and done, turns out to be enjoyable.
The secondary erotic thread deals with the characters themselves, primarily how their collaboration on the the task described above leads to their own erotic relationships.
I need editorial help for the general, most common things, but I also need someone to review the piece for plot holes, inconsistencies between certain elements which are related but which should not be perceived as such by the reader, predictability of the final resolution, and also some issues regarding the reader's symptahy for the main protagonist.
Any help is much appreciated. Thanks.
Synopsis: A married professional woman has been meeting a man from time to time on her lunch hours. An unknown extortionist has taken pictures and threatens to send them to her husband if she doesn't comply with his demands, essentially, sex and money.
So far, this may look like a very old, shopworn theme. The real goal of this story, however, is quite different from what the synopsis suggests. If it is successful, the reader will be led to follow characters through the development of the plot with an entirely mistaken perception of them which is resolved at the end. Throughout there are interactions between them and some other red herrings which support the intended, incorrect conclusion. To avoid giving it away I'll stop here until someone is interested and has a chance to read the rough version. If preferred, I can create an outline. I believe it's best to follow the path the eventual reader will take before knowing the ending twist.
The main erotic thread of the story revolves around the main progagonist's effort, with the help of others, to hold the extortionist's interest in sex (at first, virtually, via Internet communication) as long as possible, thereby to gain time to find and deal with him, and also to delay demands for anything else, this by delivering a carefully calculated trickle of sexual enticements to the criminal while not falling short of his demands altogether. Over the course of the story, that character, with the others, ventures into some new ground, some of which actually turns positive. One example is the extortionist's demands for some exhibitonism which, after all is said and done, turns out to be enjoyable.
The secondary erotic thread deals with the characters themselves, primarily how their collaboration on the the task described above leads to their own erotic relationships.
I need editorial help for the general, most common things, but I also need someone to review the piece for plot holes, inconsistencies between certain elements which are related but which should not be perceived as such by the reader, predictability of the final resolution, and also some issues regarding the reader's symptahy for the main protagonist.
Any help is much appreciated. Thanks.
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