Seeking An Editor

Barhoom

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Good evening...I am new to Literotica, but have enjoyed reading and writing erotic fantasies for some time. I tried the "contact volunteer editors" option, but there are so darn many of them...I chose one (basically at random), contacted them, and did not hear back from them... :-(

I have a series of stories that came about via e-mails to people I found on Craigslist, searching or answering ads for "erotic pen pals." I have 5 or 6 "stand-alone" fantasies, generally between 1,000 and 2,000 words each. All of them are MY OWN writing, I am not sharing anything that anybody else sent to me.

They are "straight" fantasies, they do not include rape or non-consensual sex, but they are relatively male-dominant. Again, no violence, nothing overly harsh. But they are graphic and lewd...and for me and the relevant pen-pals, exceedingly hot. I no longer interact with any of these people; like a love affair, it burned bright for a few days, perhaps a week or two, then flickered away...if you volunteer to read my work, you probably would want to have in your profile "BDSM" and "Non-Consensual Sex"; again, none are strictly non-consensual, but they lean in that direction.

I have written these fantasies/stories from both the male and female perspective, i.e., I have been the "do-er" and the "do-ee." Essentially, the first pen-pal I hooked up with was a female who enjoyed being dominated, so I catered to her fantasies, enjoyed it, and later enjoyed being both dominant and submissive, depending on whether I was the male or the female in the exchange.

I'm not sure what I'm searching for: at the risk of being too "smug," I believe I am a relatively good writer, I write and edit for my job. I suppose I am looking for guidance on whether you (generic you) think the stories are any good, are worthy of submitting to literotica, or utter rubbish. Certainly I will appreciate any guidance you may wish to provide on anything: grammar, punctuation, spelling, story structure, content, etc. For what it's worth, the grammar, spelling and punctuation issues should be minor or non-existent.

So there it is. Anybody who wants to read some reasonably short, exceedingly hot little "McNuggets" of nasty sex, please let me know!
 
The Right Word

Aha...fifth paragraph, the word I was searching for, obviously in vain, was "arrogant," not smug.

That knocked me down a notch.

:)
 
Aha...fifth paragraph, the word I was searching for, obviously in vain, was "arrogant," not smug.

That knocked me down a notch.

:)

I can take a look after the weekend, but you'll have endure your turn.

If you're game, I am too.

Ball's in your court. <bounce>
 
Edit of Story

I can take a look after the weekend, but you'll have endure your turn.

If you're game, I am too.

Ball's in your court. <bounce>


Kewl Beenz.

How would you like to review the story?

I went searching for you over in the "Volunteer Editor" section, but quickly despaired of finding you among the many thousands of entries.

I am quite willing to simply post a story here, and open it up to feedback from you and the rest of the world...
 
Kewl Beenz.

How would you like to review the story?

I went searching for you over in the "Volunteer Editor" section, but quickly despaired of finding you among the many thousands of entries.

I am quite willing to simply post a story here, and open it up to feedback from you and the rest of the world...

PM me, I'll respond with my email address, and we'll see what happens from that point.
 
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