AndreaSubbie
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Seeking a Beta Reader
I’m working on the next chapters of my stories ‘Andi and the Camera Club’, and 'Andi and the Inspector’, and also a new story ‘Andi and the Unruly Class’.
My stories are mostly Exhibitionist in nature, and seem to have been reasonably well received so if you like the genre it shouldn't be too much of a hardship to read and critique.
The spelling, punctuation and grammar won't need much correction but will need checking, but mostly I'm looking for comments on how enjoyable, readable and credible the story is. Also length, pace, suspense, tension, humour (if any) and any other observations that might be helpful.
If you are interested in reading one of the drafts as a critical friend, please send me a PM.
My signature carries a link to stories already submitted. Sorry its been so long since I last wrote, but life came and got in the way.
Andi
I’m working on the next chapters of my stories ‘Andi and the Camera Club’, and 'Andi and the Inspector’, and also a new story ‘Andi and the Unruly Class’.
My stories are mostly Exhibitionist in nature, and seem to have been reasonably well received so if you like the genre it shouldn't be too much of a hardship to read and critique.
The spelling, punctuation and grammar won't need much correction but will need checking, but mostly I'm looking for comments on how enjoyable, readable and credible the story is. Also length, pace, suspense, tension, humour (if any) and any other observations that might be helpful.
If you are interested in reading one of the drafts as a critical friend, please send me a PM.
My signature carries a link to stories already submitted. Sorry its been so long since I last wrote, but life came and got in the way.
Andi
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