seeking an editor desperately! (related to dialogue in story...)

[pinkmonkey80]

i need an editor to help me with the dialogue in terms of breaking it down so it's small enough...because my second story keeps getting rejected and i keep changing it, but it's not good enough yet.

can anyone help me please? i'd be much appreciative!

 

[minsue]

Welcome to Lit!

If you don't get any editing offers here, you can also try checking the Volunteer Editor pages.

 

[Jeff245]

Need an editor?

My name is Jeff, I would be happy to edit your story, just send it to my e-mail at Manutdreds11@aol.com.