See if this sounds like a decent story idea

[Jessica_29]

I am 20, work at a grocery store in the customer service office, making just a bit over minimum wage.

One of my regular customers is a cute man named Duke that works for a lawn mowing company, and cashes his paycheck every Friday afternoon, then buys a lottery ticket. Like most of the male customers (and coworkers), Duke is always flirting with me, asking me out, etc. I flirt back, but nothing serious, and always bashfully refuse the dates.

Then Duke wins the mega million $ lottery, and again pursues me. I finally agree, and the date was nice, he was sweet, but there wasn't any chemistry there, and I didn't want to lead him on, so I refused further dates.

He kept sending me gifts, I kept sending them back- I didn't want to take advantage.

Then one day a limousine pulls up as I walk to my car after work- it's Duke's lawyer, asking me to discuss a proposal. A written proposal, a contract.

Duke had seen on my Facebook page that my older sister needs a serious medical operation and I was trying to raise funds for it.

His offer was he would fully finance it- in addition, put her up at the finest hospital with very best of private doctors, in return for me spending every Saturday for one month with him, 10am to 2am. Of course, the catch is, I would have to do anything and everything Duke wanted...

The first story would be Saturday #1.

Tweaks? Ideas?
Like it?

 

[ambiguityperson]

I would read the crap out of that. I'm seeing this as more of a clumsy attempt at building a romance than outright sexual slavery, right? But he doesn't know how to go about it, he's dealing with conflicting emotions, frustration at her rejection of him as a suitor, so he oversteps now and again...

Fantastic. I wanna read!

 

[sirhugs]

Most readers prefer Indecent stories & this has all the right wrong potential

 

[Scattered_Ice]

the story depends more on your style, meaning how you write it

 

[jeninflorida]

Personally...I like the idea! With a sister ill and in the hospital, the bills add up quickly which puts the main character into a long term contract. Now she can grow to like him and possibly love....or into a happy submissive that wants her Dom

 

[Sean Renaud]

It's nto bad, there are a few things that I would probably change though. The first being every Saturday for a month simply isn't long enough for any sort of romance or relationship as several people have suggested and the hours are too short if you're just gonna take advantage of her for sexual play.

So I'd change it into something closer to one weekend a month for a year. That gives you twelve meetings but it's important if we are trying for romance or a relationship that you kinda skip around though which ones you'd skip depend on what kind of relationship you want.

Personally I would just go dirty and have this be pure sex but if you're going romance the first weekend or two would probably b e best burned on his clumsy attempts at romance.

 

[Jessica_29]

okay, good ideas, thanks

I like the idea of a weekend a month!

For now, let's skip the romance. Pure sex.
Romance can appear later if wanted.

How do you keep that fresh? Start slow? Or not attempt multiple stories at all?

Or since he's rich, there could be yachts, hired men for orgies, etc.

Any ideas on monthly 'themes'?

 

[HeyAll]

Sounds like a fun idea.

The first story would be great. Maybe you could have scenes where she goes shopping to buy expensive outfits and what not. She's nervous the whole time. She's conflicted, and deep down she doesn't want to do it. But she needs the money, and a part of her actually thinks it's kind of exciting. Maybe she likes the whole 'prince charming' thing, but the guy who's buying her is kind of a sleaze.

I thought it would be fine as a one-part story.

But if you wanted to do multiple chapters, then how about the guy pays her to have sex with other guys, while he watches. Or he does things like exhibitionism or whatever, where he makes her do different things each week.

 

[Sean Renaud]

I rarely advise trying for multiple stories at once. Part of it is simply my writing style where I don't so much write stories as I do dump a bunch of characters in a scenario and see if they are willing to play it out for me.

There is the above idea which I kinda sorta covered in School Girl Rayne where the man who was in charge basically spent the first section of his domination over the woman by giving her an envelope of money and telling her to go buy some stuff, go get a mani/pedi and a massage and some other beautifying stuff. Stuff that ulimately was obviously for him not for her but until the last few steps she felt pampered and even afterward her basic take was that he wasn't SO bad. If he was willing to drop 2k on clothes and shoes and stuff and all she had to do was fuck him she could do a lot worse.

The other is simply seeing how much and how you can push her. The purpose is to break her to your will. You'd start off by not allowing her any clothing or if you prefer just some humiliating clothing like a French Maid (I've been fond of dressing girls up as various video game/comic/anime characters. They generally know just enough to be disgusted about being dressed up as Chun Li, Vampirella, Sailor Moon) but it's really that for a lot of people some choice clothing is actually worse than being nude. Make her eat from a bowl on the floor, then from your hand. Constantly reminding her of the consequences of failure.