Second story posted this morning

[Chance_is_a Lady]

My second story was posted this morning. It gives me such a feeling of exhilaration just seeing it posted, but would really like some honest opinions of it.

I am not very good with links, please bear with me.

Please, if you take the time to read it, take a few seconds to vote on it. I would like public comments as well.

The story is titled 'Treasure Unbound' (I also am not very good with titles)

the link is (maybe, fingers are crossed that this works);
http://english.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=198738

 

[Loganberry]

wow, is all i can say. im not into SM stuff as a rule, but from a literary pov this was an incredible read. your attention to detail and descriptive writing is wonderful.
well done and keep it up.
regards
Loganberry

 

[Chance_is_a Lady]

wow, is all i can say. im not into SM stuff as a rule, but from a literary pov this was an incredible read. your attention to detail and descriptive writing is wonderful.
well done and keep it up.
regards
Loganberry

Believe it or not, but I am not into S/M stuff either........smiles
Thank you very much.

 

[msboy8]

What a exhilarating read! I R.V.C.ed on the story. Keep writing!

 

[Chance_is_a Lady]

What a exhilarating read! I R.V.C.ed on the story. Keep writing!

Thank you. I just have one silly question for you. What does R.V.C.ed mean?
You have said that once before and I should have asked then.

 

[Chance_is_a Lady]

Never mind, I think I just figured it out. R= Read, V= Voted and C=Commented, right?

 

[msboy8]

Never mind, I think I just figured it out. R= Read, V= Voted and C=Commented, right?

Right, I don't remember where I saw it, but it took me awhile, haha. You are a great writer!

 

[Chance_is_a Lady]

Thank you again, though I must admit, other than fastening the seatblet and making sure that the seat back and tray table are in their upright positions, I know absolutely nothing about flying. All of that information was given by a very dear friend. And he is in the process of building the plane in the story.

 

[Chance_is_a Lady]

Anyone else have anything to say about it? Please? I don't care if you hate it, please just let me know.