Second Prof Story Not As Good?

[BohemianEcstasy]

Hey, I am curious. I got GREAT reviews and stuff on my first story (linked in my sig), but it hasn't been nearly as good on my second (also linked in my sig). They're similar stories, but one is with a male professor and the other with a female one. Why do you think the second isn't getting as good of votes? I know it's not getting as much readership because it's rating IS low--kinda self-fulfilled prophecy. Who did I piss off with this story? Or is it really just not as great? Any feedback would be appreciated.

 

[BohemianEcstasy]

shameless bump

We'll call this the frog bump:



C'mon...pretty please? I realy want to know what happened with this story. You don't have to read the first, but if you could read the second and give some feedback, I think it would be productive for me.

 

[HornyHenry]

All of a sudden, suddenly...

It reminds me of that old, old thread.
The sex happened suddenly, with no warning or reason, nor any buildup to it.
AND, most important, it is a lesbian tryst with no anal, set in the anal category!

 

[msboy8]

Hi,
I have not read your first story yet. About this story, there was no buildup to the sex, there was no prior history offering any explanation. Also, until the speaker identified herself as Julia, I thought the speaker was a guy! Why was she jealous from hearing that the prof blew Bradley? Too many loose ends with this story, keep writing though. You should think about using an editor.
msboy8