KillerMuffin
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As I would have said:
I don't think POV is as cut and dried as all that. I don't think it's: the narrator is I then it's first person, you then it's second, he/she/it then it's third, period, point blank, that's all she wrote. That's a logical fallacy of sorts, a false trichotomy, if you will.
POV is a continuum, in my way of thinking. Some stories are more first person than others. One Flew Over a Cuckoo's nest is narrated by an I. The entire thing. However, the I character is essentially a wall in personality and many times never interjects himself into the scene, so, for significant portions of the novel, the POV is a very distant third person, though not omniscient. The narrator is I, but the POV for 3/4 of the novel is third. The protagonist is he. How is that possible with a black and white, either/or definition of POV? Quite simply, it's not.
In the first person protagonist/second person antagonist stories on this site, they are narrated by the I character who tells the you character how to think, feel, and behave. In a black/white definition of POV, it's all first person. In a POV continuum, it's a fluid POV style that switches from one to another as necessary.
The reason I say POV is fluid and not static (either/or for the entire work) is that POV directly influences narrative distance. In a strict sense, first person has the least narrative distance, second person has a mid-narrative distance, and third person has the most narrative distance. In a more real sense, second person has the tendency to be the most distancing between reader and narrative over the other two because of how the reader interacts with the text. Not to create an intentional fallacy among Litsters, but I doubt that writers here intend to push readers further away with the second person pronoun. I believe they intend to create more intimacy with first/second pronouns than they believe happens with first/third pronouns. That's not what actually happens. The appearance of the "you" being told what to think, feel, and do ends up being a turn off. The reader doesn't get sucked into the narrative dream and can't imagine the action happening as it goes. They're sidetracked by you and the false intimacy the writer assumes.
That's not to say this happens with all reader, but evidence (in the form of votes and hits) seems to indicate that the second person pronoun is not liked in the narrative by the audience, where first and third person are preferred.
Why is that? You is alienating. The writer mistakenly assumes it brings reader/writer together, brings the reader more deeply into the story. The reader responds by adding his or her thoughts, feelings, and what he or she would do during events, which don't match the story. Half the time (stastically), it doesn't match the character. I certainly don't have a penis, for example, and women don't arouse me.
How do we discus POV characters briefly to someone who has just started? By labeling the entire story with a POV. It's simple to say second person killed the story for most of your readers because it's true. It's not the narrative POV, strictly speaking, because the narrator is usually a first person character. However, it is a non-narrative POV. It is the POV of a major character that the story simply can't do without. The story isn't first person or second person, it's both. The sentences, individual are in one character's point of view. "You touch me." Which POV is it? An either/or paradigm will unequivocally say first. A fluid POV paradigm might say second, particularly if the preceding sentence was "You come in" and the succeding sentence was "You like it." Why? You is the actor and I is the receiver. You is taking the foreground in this sentence and I is taking the background. It's not as cut and dried as "You eat lunch" or "I drank tea" because both pronouns are in there.
This is where I think the either/or paradigm is disingenous without every intending to be. It forces every sentence, scene, paragraph, chapter, etc. into a single POV, whether that logical unit is actually in that assigned POV or not. Normatively, all works are in the narrator's POV. But that only works in a relative fashion and doesn't factor in the dimensions of distance, both narrative and reader's response.
I don't believe there's anyway we will ever agree, sr71plt (if you even read this), simply because we have different approaches to perspective and they're not likely to change. I will give you a bibliography that I developed my opinion with and then later "cemented" it with, but I don't consider these an authority I can appeal to in order to prove my opinion is more valid than yours. Literature is not science and is/isn't cannot simply exist, only an opinion that seems more accurate or valid than the current one (which will always be up for disagreement depending on the views and opinions of the people exposed to it). We can't run an experiment to "prove" who is right and who is wrong because you can't prove one theoretical perspective is more right than the other. We can only have an opinion and those are not ultimately definitive.
However, discourse is important. It's important for people to understand your view of the issue and where it came from because you are not wrong. It's also important for people to understand mine, too, because I'm not wrong either. (By "people," I mean those who are interested in the goings on.) That way, people can develop their own opinions, which they can then rely on to be thought out, logical, and based on their own consideration, not a dictionary or some MFA somewhere. We may seem diametrically opposed, but I don't think so. After all 1 + 1 = 2, but it also equals 10. The difference isn't that 2 cannot ever equal 10, the difference is that one math uses the decimal paradigm and the other math uses a binary one.
I am not doing this to "woo" you into my way of thinking, nor do I expect you to attempt to "woo" me into your way of thinking. I am not thinking of this issue in terms of right and wrong. I don't think either of us are wrong. I am doing this because I disagree that a "neutral source" has the ultimate answer to a literary discussion and that's it, it's over, someone's right, someone's wrong. My "sources" do not come right out and reiterate my opinion. You won't find my "definition" of second person in any of these. You will find the seeds and sprouts of my opinion in there, however. Which is what I arrogantly hope happens here. Someone else will find the seeds of their opinion in both of our views. After all, that's what discussion is for.
Bibliography (I will leave off style, poetry, and individual articles on narrative):
Forster, E. M. Aspects of the Novel. Orlando, FL: Mariner Books, 1956. Print.
Gardner, John. On Becoming a Novelist. New York: Norton, 1983. Print.
James, Henry. The Art of Criticism: Henry James on the Theory and the Practice of Fiction. Ed. William R. Veeder and Susan M. Griffin. Chicago: U of Chicago P, 1986. Print.
McArthur, Tom ed. The Oxford Companion to the English Language. Oxford: Oxford UP, 2002. Print.
Murfin, Ross C., and Supryia M. Ray, eds. The Bedford Glossary of Critical and Literary Terms. 3rd ed. Boston: Bedford/St. Martins, 2009. Print.
O'Connor, Flannery. Mystery and Manners: Occasional Prose. Ed. Robert Fitzgerald and Sally Fitzgerald. New York: Farrar, Straus and Giroux, 1993. Print.
Pack, Robert, and Jay Parini, eds. Writers on Writing: A Bread Loaf Anthology. Hanover, NH: Middlebury College, 1991. Print.
Smiley, Jane. Thirteen Ways of Looking at a Novel. New York: Knopf, 2005. Print.
Stone, Sarah and Ron Nyren. Deepening Fiction: A Practical Guide for Intermediate and Advanced Writers. New York: Pearson Longman, 2005. Print.
I don't think POV is as cut and dried as all that. I don't think it's: the narrator is I then it's first person, you then it's second, he/she/it then it's third, period, point blank, that's all she wrote. That's a logical fallacy of sorts, a false trichotomy, if you will.
POV is a continuum, in my way of thinking. Some stories are more first person than others. One Flew Over a Cuckoo's nest is narrated by an I. The entire thing. However, the I character is essentially a wall in personality and many times never interjects himself into the scene, so, for significant portions of the novel, the POV is a very distant third person, though not omniscient. The narrator is I, but the POV for 3/4 of the novel is third. The protagonist is he. How is that possible with a black and white, either/or definition of POV? Quite simply, it's not.
In the first person protagonist/second person antagonist stories on this site, they are narrated by the I character who tells the you character how to think, feel, and behave. In a black/white definition of POV, it's all first person. In a POV continuum, it's a fluid POV style that switches from one to another as necessary.
The reason I say POV is fluid and not static (either/or for the entire work) is that POV directly influences narrative distance. In a strict sense, first person has the least narrative distance, second person has a mid-narrative distance, and third person has the most narrative distance. In a more real sense, second person has the tendency to be the most distancing between reader and narrative over the other two because of how the reader interacts with the text. Not to create an intentional fallacy among Litsters, but I doubt that writers here intend to push readers further away with the second person pronoun. I believe they intend to create more intimacy with first/second pronouns than they believe happens with first/third pronouns. That's not what actually happens. The appearance of the "you" being told what to think, feel, and do ends up being a turn off. The reader doesn't get sucked into the narrative dream and can't imagine the action happening as it goes. They're sidetracked by you and the false intimacy the writer assumes.
That's not to say this happens with all reader, but evidence (in the form of votes and hits) seems to indicate that the second person pronoun is not liked in the narrative by the audience, where first and third person are preferred.
Why is that? You is alienating. The writer mistakenly assumes it brings reader/writer together, brings the reader more deeply into the story. The reader responds by adding his or her thoughts, feelings, and what he or she would do during events, which don't match the story. Half the time (stastically), it doesn't match the character. I certainly don't have a penis, for example, and women don't arouse me.
How do we discus POV characters briefly to someone who has just started? By labeling the entire story with a POV. It's simple to say second person killed the story for most of your readers because it's true. It's not the narrative POV, strictly speaking, because the narrator is usually a first person character. However, it is a non-narrative POV. It is the POV of a major character that the story simply can't do without. The story isn't first person or second person, it's both. The sentences, individual are in one character's point of view. "You touch me." Which POV is it? An either/or paradigm will unequivocally say first. A fluid POV paradigm might say second, particularly if the preceding sentence was "You come in" and the succeding sentence was "You like it." Why? You is the actor and I is the receiver. You is taking the foreground in this sentence and I is taking the background. It's not as cut and dried as "You eat lunch" or "I drank tea" because both pronouns are in there.
This is where I think the either/or paradigm is disingenous without every intending to be. It forces every sentence, scene, paragraph, chapter, etc. into a single POV, whether that logical unit is actually in that assigned POV or not. Normatively, all works are in the narrator's POV. But that only works in a relative fashion and doesn't factor in the dimensions of distance, both narrative and reader's response.
I don't believe there's anyway we will ever agree, sr71plt (if you even read this), simply because we have different approaches to perspective and they're not likely to change. I will give you a bibliography that I developed my opinion with and then later "cemented" it with, but I don't consider these an authority I can appeal to in order to prove my opinion is more valid than yours. Literature is not science and is/isn't cannot simply exist, only an opinion that seems more accurate or valid than the current one (which will always be up for disagreement depending on the views and opinions of the people exposed to it). We can't run an experiment to "prove" who is right and who is wrong because you can't prove one theoretical perspective is more right than the other. We can only have an opinion and those are not ultimately definitive.
However, discourse is important. It's important for people to understand your view of the issue and where it came from because you are not wrong. It's also important for people to understand mine, too, because I'm not wrong either. (By "people," I mean those who are interested in the goings on.) That way, people can develop their own opinions, which they can then rely on to be thought out, logical, and based on their own consideration, not a dictionary or some MFA somewhere. We may seem diametrically opposed, but I don't think so. After all 1 + 1 = 2, but it also equals 10. The difference isn't that 2 cannot ever equal 10, the difference is that one math uses the decimal paradigm and the other math uses a binary one.
I am not doing this to "woo" you into my way of thinking, nor do I expect you to attempt to "woo" me into your way of thinking. I am not thinking of this issue in terms of right and wrong. I don't think either of us are wrong. I am doing this because I disagree that a "neutral source" has the ultimate answer to a literary discussion and that's it, it's over, someone's right, someone's wrong. My "sources" do not come right out and reiterate my opinion. You won't find my "definition" of second person in any of these. You will find the seeds and sprouts of my opinion in there, however. Which is what I arrogantly hope happens here. Someone else will find the seeds of their opinion in both of our views. After all, that's what discussion is for.
Bibliography (I will leave off style, poetry, and individual articles on narrative):
Forster, E. M. Aspects of the Novel. Orlando, FL: Mariner Books, 1956. Print.
Gardner, John. On Becoming a Novelist. New York: Norton, 1983. Print.
James, Henry. The Art of Criticism: Henry James on the Theory and the Practice of Fiction. Ed. William R. Veeder and Susan M. Griffin. Chicago: U of Chicago P, 1986. Print.
McArthur, Tom ed. The Oxford Companion to the English Language. Oxford: Oxford UP, 2002. Print.
Murfin, Ross C., and Supryia M. Ray, eds. The Bedford Glossary of Critical and Literary Terms. 3rd ed. Boston: Bedford/St. Martins, 2009. Print.
O'Connor, Flannery. Mystery and Manners: Occasional Prose. Ed. Robert Fitzgerald and Sally Fitzgerald. New York: Farrar, Straus and Giroux, 1993. Print.
Pack, Robert, and Jay Parini, eds. Writers on Writing: A Bread Loaf Anthology. Hanover, NH: Middlebury College, 1991. Print.
Smiley, Jane. Thirteen Ways of Looking at a Novel. New York: Knopf, 2005. Print.
Stone, Sarah and Ron Nyren. Deepening Fiction: A Practical Guide for Intermediate and Advanced Writers. New York: Pearson Longman, 2005. Print.