Searching for an editor for Hotwife/Fetish stories

[LeatherGal]

Hi,
i'm searching for an editor for stories based on our adventures and fantasies.
The stories would include Lowing Wife, Fetish, Interracial, Exhibitionist & Voyeur and Group Sex.
I'm not a native english speaker, english is my third language and, my bad, my worst because of the lack of opportunities to use it.
This would be an occasion to improve it.
I would like to write it in english, especially to reach more people than it would be possible in the other languages.
I wrote an introduction and a good portion of one story and it would be helpful to know if i should pulp the idea because there is no hope for my bad writing, or i could keep going.
Thank you

 

[AlphaLyon]

A few quick questions

Just for a frame of reference, how long (number of words) is each story?
Are you looking for one editor for the whole series? I could help with some of those as I'm more familiar with those themes, but not all of them.
What is your timeline / when are you looking to publish?

I'm sure there are some editors who would love to help.
We don't bite, we nibble.

 

[LeatherGal]

The introduction is around 2000 words.
At this very moment, our first erotic story about 11400 words long, it could be already splitted into 2 chapters, but it's not nearly finished.
I don't have any schedule for publicing.
Despite the fact that i know the difference between "your" and "you're", english is of course not my native tongue, i have some issues with grammar, synta, synonyms and common phrases.
As a german and italian native speaker i know that the transaltors (google, dict or pons) are the best meh.

 

[surferjake]

I can try to take a go at what you have, if you haven't found anyone yet. Feel free to PM me if so.

Hi,
i'm searching for an editor for stories based on our adventures and fantasies.
The stories would include Lowing Wife, Fetish, Interracial, Exhibitionist & Voyeur and Group Sex.
I'm not a native english speaker, english is my third language and, my bad, my worst because of the lack of opportunities to use it.
This would be an occasion to improve it.
I would like to write it in english, especially to reach more people than it would be possible in the other languages.
I wrote an introduction and a good portion of one story and it would be helpful to know if i should pulp the idea because there is no hope for my bad writing, or i could keep going.
Thank you

 

[LeatherGal]

Hi, i have already an very experienced editor.
We are working on the introduction, which has more descriptive character.
I have a lot of ideas and material, we'll see.
So far he didn't run away screaming.
But thank you, if i need help i'll give you a call.

 

[LeatherGal]

Hey,
the guy that offered his help first, said that he may be too busy for a while.
So i'm again watching for an editor.

 

[AlphaLyon]

Hey,
the guy that offered his help first, said that he may be too busy for a while.
So i'm again watching for an editor.

I was the first to reply, but I never heard from you, did I?

 

[LeatherGal]

I'm sorry but i did, it's written just under your first question about the lenght.
See #3
You didn't reply to that anymore, so i thought you wouldn’t care.

 

[LeatherGal]

And sorry about that, but i'm new here and you have to admit that this site is a bit confusing. At least to me.

 

[AlphaLyon]

I'm sorry but i did, it's written just under your first question about the lenght.
See #3
You didn't reply to that anymore, so i thought you wouldn’t care.

Oh! I'm so sorry. I didn't realize that you were actually asking for help from me specifically. Most of the editor requests I get are sent as messages through the DM or email.
There are a few threads that might help you out for finding an editor, in case you missed them:
https://forum.literotica.com/showthread.php?t=493732
https://forum.literotica.com/showthread.php?t=175648

I'll DM you.

 

[AlphaLyon]

Hi,
i'm searching for an editor for stories based on our adventures and fantasies.
The stories would include Lowing Wife, Fetish, Interracial, Exhibitionist & Voyeur and Group Sex.

If the story is anything like the excerpt you shared with me, it is important that you inform your editor or the amount of race-play / interracial power dynamics involved. This is NOT an "ebony and ivory" story, but a fetishization of race with cultural appropriation.

Also, you will need to remove all reference to underage sexual activity, even masturbatory. The amount of graphic detail you went over in your submission is WAAAAAAAY beyond the line.

I'm sorry, but I am going to have to pass on this.

 

[LeatherGal]

Not really true


Not true,
this guy is making mountains out of molehills.

 

[KeithD]

Not true,
this guy is making mountains out of molehills.

Well, it certainly would be something better sent more privately, I think.

 

[LeatherGal]

Well, it certainly would be something better sent more privately, I think.

He will have his reasons to react like that. :caning:

Can't wrap my head around the fact that a Gay stories writer wanted to edit my drafts

 

[LeatherGal]

Searching for editor, reference

So really nobody here willing to help?

 

[surferjake]

Searching for editor, reference

So really nobody here willing to help?

you can DM me, and include a short extract?