Searching For A Mind Control Type Story

FreshlyDirty

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Please help me find a story. I read it once, it was good, now I can't find it anymore. The story I have been searching so hard to find again, but can't seem to do so goes something like this:

This story about a woman who lets her son's friends come over to play in her pool and there is one of the guys who is "overly" developed compared to the rest of his peers. He not only has bigger equipment than them (bigger cock), but he seems to be the dominant leader of the pack.

The young guy has a way of looking at the woman that puts her in heat. She can't fight it. She stares at his package as he plays in the pool with her son and the rest of his friends, watching through a window in her home. His gaze is fierce like it looks right through her.

As time progresses, he seems to be more and more controlling with his gaze and demeanor. At one point the woman watches him take her daughter off for sex. She sits there and watches through the window as her daughter comes back looking well fucked. She gets hot and bothered by the scene.

The group of friends her son hangs out with sometimes go to other mother's houses to play. The other women seem to know something about this strange young man that the main character mother does not know. They offer subtle hints, winks, knowing smirks and grins, but do not come out right and say they are fucking the young lad. She knows something is up, some kind of conspiracy, but can't nail it down for sure.

At one point the young lad is in another mother's mini-van, but instead of sitting in the back with all of his friends, he is in the front next to the mother. The main character mother is staring at them and thinking it strange. The two in the mini-van whisper to each other then look over at her and give a wink or smirk. She just knows something is up. She really thinks this young lad with the huge cock is fucking all of his friends mothers. Dammit, she wants a piece of that meat too!


If this story sounds familiar and you know the title and/or author, please post it here or send me a PM. The story had a strange vibe to it, like mind control or sci-fi or something like that. The young guy had something going on with his stare/gaze, not to mention his huge package for such a young fella. Thanks!
 
Shit. I wish I could help you :(

That sounds like a really good story...

Yes, it was a really good story. That's why I've spent hours trying to find it. No luck though. I've tried all kinds of combinations of key words and phrases that I think were in the story.

I know that:
- A couple scenes took place at the pool at the mother's house.

- The mother noticed that her son's friend was the "leader" or "dominant" of the group. She noticed he was stronger, faster, and took more control in making decisions than the others.

-The mother saw the dominant young lad take her daughter off to fuck her and saw them return. She was both ashamed and lustful over witnessing this, ashamed she did or said nothing to stop it.

-Other mothers in the neighborhood made sly, slick, not very blunt comments about the young dominant lads size. They didn't come right out and say, "he has a huge cock." They made inferences and it drove the main character mother crazy that they would not come right out and say it. She always wondered if there was more to the other mothers' relationship with the young lad other than just him coming over to visit their sons.

-There was a scene in a van or mini-van in which the main character mother observed "suspicous" behavior between one of the other mothers and the young dominant lad. Again, there was a teasing gesture made toward her, like "you know what's going on, come on figure it out and get with the program already."

-I think that the young dominant lad was of some indian, asian, or african descent. I can't remember for sure, but I think that was part of the mystique about him. He was some far off place, some place that you might stereotype the people to know rituals, black magic, voodoo or some crazy mind power shit like that. That was part of his "stare/gaze" control thing.



The story was really hot. The hottest part was that the other mothers hinted around that they were fucking the young lad and it drove the main character mother crazy that she couldn't find out for sure. It was a very mysterious kind of quality, like a conspiracy or something against this one mother. Maybe because she was knew to the neighborhood or something. I think I remember the mother saying something about how difficult it was for her son to make new friends or something like that. Anyway she was kept out of the loop, but teased and it seemed like they were trying to fill her with lust and prepare her for the time when the young lad finally took control and had his way with her. They made a few innuendos, referenced his penis size on the sly, and even hinted at how he left them fully satiated with his stamina, size, and strength.


If you come up with anything, let me know please. Thanks.
 
Forgot To Mention

I forgot to mention that the young dominant guy might have been some type of demon or something. I'm not sure, it was really weird how he had a controlling factor about him other than just typical manipulation, domination, or aggressiveness. He had something irrational there, something that made the mother obey him.
 
Hmm... did you read it on this site? Was it in a great big list of stories, or the frontpage of wherever?

Wayback machine might help in this case. I've used it to track down old stories before.
 
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