Scrapped story

RicoLouis

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Okay here is a story I started to write but scrapped. The main idea I had was to have a running timeline for diffrent characters to allow them to cross paths.


Dear Applicant
We are pleased to annouce that you have been accepted to the University of Moss Isles. We look forward to having you as a student of are prestigious school. Reqistration and class scheduales will be issued on August 13 in the gymnasim. All freshman students who require may call 555-1138 for dorm room assignments but must do so before Augugst 6. Below is a calander of the upcoming semester events. Once again we think you and welcome you to our school.

Fall Semester Calander
Aug 13 Pre-Term Preperation
Aug 16 Classes Begin
Sept Labor Day
Sept 24 Home Coming
Oct 31 Halloween
Nov 22-26 Thanksgiving Holiday
Dec 10 Classes End
Dec 13 - 17 Final Exams

CHAPTER ONE: ARRIVAL
Friday / Aug 13 / 9:00am

James Smith / 9:00am
The cool wind sweeps through the trees which have just begun to hint of the coming fall. Meanwhile students new and old make there way across the campus. James smiled breathing in the fresh air as he climbed out of the car looking at what would be his home for the next few years. He was both excited and nervious as he walked around the back of the car and popped his trunk. He was a long way from Northern California and had no idea what awaited him inside. Hell he was the first person in his family to ever make it to collage. He heaved up his duffle bag and tossed it on his shoulder then grabbed his other bag setting them on the ground. He coldn't help but look at a few of the girls here and there as he walked. He was certaintly going to like it here he thought to himself as he watched two girls walking in front of him wearing very thight jeans. He decided to head over to the dorms and get settled in before he went to the main building for reqistration. Luckily classes didn't begin till monday so he had all weekend to find out where his classes were and a chance to have a little fun before he had to hit the books. Out of the cornor of his eye he caught a glimps of a lovely short haired blonde getting out of a taxi.



Elizabeth Jones / 9:02am
Elizabeth stepped out of the taxi looking around. So this was America. The old arciteture of the university didn't look that much diffrent from that of great britan she thought. Elizabeth had decided to cross the pond to go to school. She needed an escape from her family not to mention the mundane life of being waited on hand and foot. She may have grown up rich but she was determined to make her own way from now on. She smiled at the cab driver as he got out and walked to the back of cab and openned the trunk.
"Here you go." The old guy said as he helped her get her large rolling suitcase out.
"Thank you sir." She said as she grabbed her other bag and set it ontop pulling up the handle. She headed up the walkway looking around. She heard someone yelling as she turned her head to see some bloody git hanging out of the window.



John Williams & Robert Brown / 9:03am
"Yea, Collage baby." John said as he sat back down in the car.
"This is going to be so fucking awsome." Robert said as he looked around at the quality tail. Robert and John had been friends all there life and now they where both starting school together it was going to be nothing but one endless party. Needless to say if it wasn't for a football scholarship neither of them would be here but now that they where here they may as well make the most of it.
"So you want to go register first or should we go check out or dorm." John said as he grinned. The thought of the co-ed dorm was very appealing knowing that there would be dozens of hot, young collage titties right down the hall.
"Dorms." Rob said with a grin. Him and John already had a bet on who could get laid first and Rob didn't intend to lose.
"Hey check it out." Rob said as he pointed at two blond girls walking up along the walkway from the collage.
 
Sounds like a fine idea. It might be easier to turn into a Chyoo story with some pre-planning and agreement among contributing authors, or perhaps for you to nail down a series of events in one storyline and leave obvious pieces to be plugged in.

There are some classic versions of this where the various characters' viewpoints of what happened disagree in detail. See Rashomon for a notable example, although these are separate accounts from after the action described.

A story like this could leave open multiple alternatives for why a certain character chose to take a particular action, or how other charactes saw a particular action.

Are you looking for any sort of specific suggestions?

-Z.
 
I like the time line concept but the story just wasn't working for me but I still thought I would share my idea, maybe someone else could get some idea's or something. Or prehaps give some idea's I might be able to use in an alternate story.

I like the rashomon effect idea you have.
 
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