Sci-Fi / Incest Story Idea

[RicoLouis]

Okay, One of two incest story ideas I have. This is about as an original story line as I have ever heard, at least I have never read a story about it. So here it goes.


One hundred years from now humanity has cured most genetic diseases and defects through the use of genetic engineering. However all to late they realize that they have created a new problem.

Genetic Drift Syndrome- caused by the alteration of a persons genetic code it causes them to become genetically incompatible with others. The average genetically modified human in the story is only compatible with about 10-15% of the population. It has also made about fifty percent of the female population unable to carry male offspring without there own immune system attacking the unborn offspring due to the y chromosome. Creating a larger population of women to men. Lesbian marriage is slowly become the norm with some states allowing for men to marry multiple women. The world wide population has halfed in the last decade.

The very wealthy turn to highly expensive and risky artifcial wombs. Dating serves begin offering genetic compatibility match making, Sperm banks begin auctioning sperm to those who are compatible with the banks paying hefty fees to there donors. Wealthy couples begin to hire surrogate mothers, some from poorer countries that have had less genetic engineering research. Some lucky enough to find someone who they are compatible with even go as far as allowing there spouse to sleep with others in there family to provide offspring. Some poorer people however turn to a once age old taboo. Incest. Especially in the case of siblings since they have the same parents and mostly share the same DNA. Of course this increases the risk of genetic mutation and the need for engineering to correct them further decreasing the chance of them being able to find a compatible mate outside of there own family.

The story follows a highly modified young man who makes a living donating his highly valuable sperm is asked by his married sister to secretly impregnate her after she finds out she and her soon to be husband are not compatible. However others in the family soon find out but keep the secret. The story ends twenty years later with his Daughter/Niece incompatible with ninety nine percent of the population coming to him wishing for him to impregnate her like he has her mother and aunts. He having fathered nine kids by his three sisters and there all girls.

 

[Fantasies_only]

Okay, One of two incest story ideas I have. This is about as an original story line as I have ever heard, at least I have never read a story about it. So here it goes.


One hundred years from now humanity has cured most genetic diseases and defects through the use of genetic engineering. However all to late they realize that they have created a new problem.

Genetic Drift Syndrome- caused by the alteration of a persons genetic code it causes them to become genetically incompatible with others. The average genetically modified human in the story is only compatible with about 10-15% of the population. It has also made about fifty percent of the female population unable to carry male offspring without there own immune system attacking the unborn offspring due to the y chromosome. Creating a larger population of women to men. Lesbian marriage is slowly become the norm with some states allowing for men to marry multiple women. The world wide population has halfed in the last decade.

The very wealthy turn to highly expensive and risky artifcial wombs. Dating serves begin offering genetic compatibility match making, Sperm banks begin auctioning sperm to those who are compatible with the banks paying hefty fees to there donors. Wealthy couples begin to hire surrogate mothers, some from poorer countries that have had less genetic engineering research. Some lucky enough to find someone who they are compatible with even go as far as allowing there spouse to sleep with others in there family to provide offspring. Some poorer people however turn to a once age old taboo. Incest. Especially in the case of siblings since they have the same parents and mostly share the same DNA. Of course this increases the risk of genetic mutation and the need for engineering to correct them further decreasing the chance of them being able to find a compatible mate outside of there own family.

The story follows a highly modified young man who makes a living donating his highly valuable sperm is asked by his married sister to secretly impregnate her after she finds out she and her soon to be husband are not compatible. However others in the family soon find out but keep the secret. The story ends twenty years later with his Daughter/Niece incompatible with ninety nine percent of the population coming to him wishing for him to impregnate her like he has her mother and aunts. He having fathered nine kids by his three sisters and there all girls.

This theme is actually from a Star Trek episode (Beverly Crusher falls for an alien of a genetically engineered race).
It's also from Voyager (Harry Kim falls for an alien from a genetically enhanced race).
I'm not saying it's a bad idea, but I do think you need a few plot twists here and there.

I think the sperm bank should be named Succu-Sperm, and the lesbian dating service features a rather large traveling DNA store in The Incu Bus.

Edit 1: The Voyager episode was with a cybernetic race (chip implant passed down from generation to generation), but the chip sent messages straight to the brain, so it was sort of a genetically enhanced people.
Edit 2: I didn't see the part about the multiple children which is a big plot twist.
I really like this and want to know what happens to them.
Why are they all girls?

 

[Fantasies_only]

I'll give you some better feedback.
Although interesting enough to further the story, I think the focus shouldn't be strictly on procreation as you saw in my recent thread.
I do however think a combination of my concept (not mine exactly) and your story would be good.

In my society, humans live in underground tunnels in a nuclear winter.
Human cloning and bio-engineering is accepted and used like the Internet (for use of all senses above ground).
The problem is that procreation is now impossible so there is no use for intercourse.
There also is no modesty (sexually embarrassed) among the super enhanced clones.
To avoid sexual desensitizing, extra DNA sequences are used like backup generators.
When this new sequence is activated, all senses are heightened with sexual and sensual stimuli.

This can be incorporated with your story of alien incest, by having alien cruises to and from Earth (also good for voyeurism and mind control fetishes).

To the person who didn't want me to even mention minors not in sexual themes.
You were right (in this case), I kinda like it better as clones.

 

[RicoLouis]

Okay sounds to much like the naked earth comics by ferries.

 

[Fantasies_only]

Okay sounds to much like the naked earth comics by ferries.

I didn't mean it to be a copy, of course as the author you may do as you wish, but I did not intend to have rape, BDSM, defication or urin fetishes, or any other kinki hardcore stuff the comic series included.

By the way, the comic books look American.
I'd expect them to be Japanese like Metropolis.

There should be a series of decontamination booths set up in the space ports.
Let's say it's possible for an alien to have sex with his or her family, to create compatible self splitting cells for the human clones (underground humans dying of radiation poisoning).