Schoolgirl spanking story

[Totzman]

Looking for feedback on my new story. If spanking isn't your thing, that's fine, but I'm only looking for feedback on the quality of the story itself.

http://www.literotica.com/s/a-schoolgirls-spanking

 

[tuppergirl]

Great story Totzman! I love the voyeuristic quality of it! You don't see many spanking stories done in this style.

I think your description of the girl's body was a little excessive, but I know guys seem to like that in a story. Just like how you have Sara strip naked. I think spanking stories are sexier when girls keep some of their clothes on. Must be a guy thing.

One other thing, I would have liked to read more detail into what Sara was thinking while she was being spanked.

Are you planning to write more stories in this series? The ending made me think you might be planning to continue.