Rybka, just in case

[Senna Jawa]

Rybka,

I am a bit lost about the requests to comment on one of your poems. I am not promising anything but just in case, which one would you like to have commented first?

Regards,

 

[Rybka]

Poem for criticism

S.J., the poem I have requested input on is:
My Father's Sky - Growling

It is unusual for a special reason and has received a number of high votes and e-mail feedbacks.

RE Votes: You once noted that ones are as meaningful to you as are fives. - I am beginning to appreciate that. I have a new poem that has two ones and only three views!

Regards,                 Rybka

 

[Senna Jawa]

Re: Poem for criticism

S.J., the poem I have requested input on is:
My Father's Sky - Growling

Rybka, sorry, but I give up, I have no chance to understand your poem.

Best regards,

 

[Rybka]

Re: Re: Poem for criticism

Rybka, sorry, but I give up, I have no chance to understand your poem.

Best regards,

Senna Jawa you are an honest man and my respect for you has further increased.

Regards,                 Rybka