RP threads feedback

[Neale]

I just read Necromencer2's last post in the Diablo2 thread, and was curious enough to go find out just what he was talking about. Oh, dear. What a mess that was.

Still, perhaps he had a decent idea, even if it was executed in a somewhat less than optimal fashion.

Do any of you RP posters think that a feedback thread, or threads, for our ongoing stories would be of any use? If so, this board seems the most appropriate place, but it may get more attention on the RP boards.

My major concern is that it may turn into a flame-fest like we've just witnessed. It is my belief, however, that the majority of Lit members are mature enough to respect each other, even while giving and receiving honest, constructive criticism.

Opinions?

 

[Angelus]

I say that a feedback thread here would be a damn good idea because I would love to be told if I am beginning to stink in an RP thread and not even realize it.

It would be excellent to get feedback

 

[Hecate]

I am mainly hanging out at the SRP BB (even though not writing a lot myself these days). I would think feedback is a quite good idea in most cases, but (Yeah, you saw that coming, right?)... we all are kind of touchy/proud about our writing efforts, be it a story or at the RP-boards, and feedback, as much appreciated as it is when being positive quite easily turns sour when the flaws are being pointed out. Now, for the authors who submit their stories, they run the risk consciously, givving their "works" ti public, including the risk of feedback of all kinds in public.

For the RP's I am not sure the same rules apply ... they are not always intended to be elaborate and critique-proof works of artistic writing, but more often spontaneous written images and actions acording to mood and scenen that the moment requires. I think we would put too much of a strain on some players if they had to fear public "feedback" for their writing skills, specially for those who come from other language backgrounds and use the RP boards as playground for practicing and loosing their inhibitions with another language.

The other reason I think feedback on RP's is a little difficult is the fact that a writer is not really "responsible" for his character, the actions and the turn of events, and sometimes will already have to put up with developments that were not in his own interest. E.g. you don't want to drop out of the story, but are already annoyed as hell because someone made your character a cruel monster while you spent the last 50 posts developing the deeply wounded and confused soul, serching for the light at the end of the tunnel, you type up a post just to keep it going - which won't sure be one of the best in that mood - and then someone comes slamming some "feedback" into your face for that ... oooops, not sure if I would enjoy that!

Of course there are many RP'ers who use this medium as a experimental writing area, to test and improve their story writing, but just as many don't take it that serious (well, on the SRP BB anyway ) and I wouldn't want to put pressure on those participants by making them feel their performance will be judged in the future.

I for one simply contact a person by mail if I think their abilities are either outstanding or suck big time - that way I can be much more open and detailed, without having to worry the person might be publically embarrassed or such.

For those who really want to know though - why not ask for feedback on an OOC-thread on the respective board? There are the people who can judge your skills because they interact with you ... on the general board most likely the majority doesn't check out the RP-boards on a regular basis and so they are not the ones to help you with feedback anyway, whereas (again, at least on the SRP BB) many players never post on the general board - so you might loose the attention of those who do know best.

 

[Merelan]

As usual she is right. if you are concerned about your actions, or someone else's, start an OOC thread about the srp/rp. There are several already there. Anyone who wants to give feedback to someone about their "performance" should email them directly. If no email is available, well, tough luck then.
I for one love to hear, good and bad, comments about my writing. Yes, truly. There are days, and times, when it doesn't work. When I post something because it is my "turn". It isn't any good, but I post and hope for the best. Soemtimes threads die out fast, sometimes they linger. I have to think it is mostly due to the "chemistry" between the players. As in real life, it's either there, or it's not.
As Hecate mentioned, much more eloquently then I could, I have also "snapped" a post reply in frustration at what someone has just made my character do. Not often, as I have a tendancy of shutting down and coming back later and rereading. Maybe they saw something I didn't. If I still feel the same, then I post.
I have even started an "I admire your srp" thread twice now for people. They acknowledged it and let me know they appreciated my comments.
So, well. What the darling Hecate said.
I am rambling. Someone shut me up.

 

[Ravenloft]

*Stepping from the shadows, covering Merelan's lips with a hot hungry kiss.*

Still talking now?!

 

[Merelan]

Mmmmphhhhh.....
starting to faint from lack of air. Someone catch me please! (Of course I send that mentally as I am busy with my mouth.)

 

[Ravenloft]

*Holding Merelan's hips, keeping her on her feet. Continuing the kiss, just to be sure she is well and truly silenced.*
Muahahah!!!

 

[Merelan]

Struggling I break free. Pulling back with what I hope is a winsome pout.
"hey don't you like what I have to say?"

 

[Ravenloft]

Oh, I love hearing you talk! You just asked for someone to shut you up... remember?!

 

[Beaker]

Get off her you filty leech!

 

[Ravenloft]

*Leaping away.*

No salt!!!

oh, sorry, its you!

Have at her fella!