Ropework domination story

[Seeking__passion]

I’m currently writing a first person scenario story of a male dominating a female , using rope work . Would love to hear from any females who are interested in co-writing / giving feedback on my story ?

 

[EroticTurtle]

I'm not a female but I am a lifestyle Dom and have been for years. I'm very much into rope bondage and suspension. If I can be of service with anything please feel free to speak up.

 

[Carnevil9]

How about a Dom who used to be a sailor, and knows all sorts of esoteric rope tricks?

 

[Seeking__passion]

Thank you guys - that’s much appreciated ! I’m not a dom, at least not in practicality , so my writing is based on imagination . But I would certainly appreciate your feedback on my story . I’ve submitted it but I’ll wait to see whether it publishes or not .
I appreciate the replies !

 

[EroticTurtle]

Please send me a link to it when it is available

 

[Seeking__passion]

I’m proud to say it’s published !

 

[Seeking__passion]

https://i.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=2980145

 

[Seeking__passion]

I read both of your submissions. Great story telling and attention to details. Thank you.

Kate

Kate - thank you for taking the time to read both , and for replying here with such positive feedback - It’s much appreciated . If you have any constructive criticism I’d be happy to hear them also !

 

[Seeking__passion]

Here’s the link to part 2 . I would be interested to know anyone’s thoughts on switching for first person to third person perspective

 

[Seeking__passion]

https://i.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=2983565

And any other feedback much appreciated !