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Mike73 said:
will this be an incest story? If so, which family grouping or groupings? Wil it be in the open, or secret.
Of course, start with your characters- is it Mom, Dad, boy ( 18), girl ( 20) or what? Are there grandpasrents, more kids, Uncles, servants?
Do you want to try a short 900 word one scene story, or a novella?
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well, I guess it has to be an incest storys. Unless there aren't any other stranded people/savages on this island ...
I think, it could start with brother-sister.
The girl is really missing her boyfriend ... and the sex with him. But the only guy near her (besides her father) is her brother .... and then, she once caught him while he masturbated. Back at home, she always loved to while her boyfriend masturbated in front of her .... so now, she loved to watch her brother. At first she watches him secretly, but one day, she becomes brave and tells him that she watches him many times ... and now she wants to get a closer look ....
Another variation could be: It's father, daughter and son. There is no mom. Maybe she died (while they stranded ?) or she is back at home. At first, everything is fine, but after some time, the father is missing the sex. And since his daughter can't buy new clothings, her old clothes becomes more and more ripped and show more and more of her hot body ....
Maybe this could be linked together: Girl watches brother masturbate, while at the same time, the father becomes horny for her. Then, at first she fucks with the brother, then with the father .... and finally they gang bang her.
Some time later, they are rescued. When a doctor takes a look at them, he notices that the girl is pregnant ....
I think, it could start with brother-sister.
The girl is really missing her boyfriend ... and the sex with him. But the only guy near her (besides her father) is her brother .... and then, she once caught him while he masturbated. Back at home, she always loved to while her boyfriend masturbated in front of her .... so now, she loved to watch her brother. At first she watches him secretly, but one day, she becomes brave and tells him that she watches him many times ... and now she wants to get a closer look ....
Another variation could be: It's father, daughter and son. There is no mom. Maybe she died (while they stranded ?) or she is back at home. At first, everything is fine, but after some time, the father is missing the sex. And since his daughter can't buy new clothings, her old clothes becomes more and more ripped and show more and more of her hot body ....
Maybe this could be linked together: Girl watches brother masturbate, while at the same time, the father becomes horny for her. Then, at first she fucks with the brother, then with the father .... and finally they gang bang her.
Some time later, they are rescued. When a doctor takes a look at them, he notices that the girl is pregnant ....
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Well that is more interesting than Tom Hanks and a Volley ball.
I don't know that I would play off the Robinsons as a direct story link. I would use the idea, but create my own story as how they got to be stranded. Even if it was the same I would still change the name.
Thinking you could have a whole chapter before the stranding about some of the tease between the sister and brother. How nothing is out of the ordinary they are just two young adults. That take notice of one another but never take action.
Suddenly after a terrible situation they become stranded in what ever odd combination you creat. Yes clothing would be a minimal or at least quickly become unmanagable to keep.
It wouldn't take long before the boy needs some relief wether or not he attempts to tag his own sister or if he just jerks off to her looks. I would guess even a farther would eventually need some kind of sexual relief. I wouldn't strike the reader with an immediate sex scene. I would allow the suspense to build making the reader want to have it happen and slowly alow the story to shift into a loving caring animalistic sex.
Being careful as an imediate farther son team on the daughter will give an instant unbelievable factor to the story.
I don't know that I would play off the Robinsons as a direct story link. I would use the idea, but create my own story as how they got to be stranded. Even if it was the same I would still change the name.
Thinking you could have a whole chapter before the stranding about some of the tease between the sister and brother. How nothing is out of the ordinary they are just two young adults. That take notice of one another but never take action.
Suddenly after a terrible situation they become stranded in what ever odd combination you creat. Yes clothing would be a minimal or at least quickly become unmanagable to keep.
It wouldn't take long before the boy needs some relief wether or not he attempts to tag his own sister or if he just jerks off to her looks. I would guess even a farther would eventually need some kind of sexual relief. I wouldn't strike the reader with an immediate sex scene. I would allow the suspense to build making the reader want to have it happen and slowly alow the story to shift into a loving caring animalistic sex.
Being careful as an imediate farther son team on the daughter will give an instant unbelievable factor to the story.
first of all thanks for all the advices you gave me
1-The longer the story will be the more it will be good i mean i am aming at long story may be a novel but i dont think that is possible because my english is not that good but i would try if i get help
2-i am not into incest so i would prefer very much if the story was out of it but i guess you are right about the existanse of other people otherwise it may impossiblise to create scene
3-i like the idea of slowly going like explaing how they got there may be few sex scene before the have been strannded
4-i like the idea of lossing cloths with time due to natural casues and they cant replace them and i was thinking about that before i post the idea i also thinking that may be for example they found of eatsome kind of plants which aphrodisiac without realizing it and they cant help them for sometime i like ideas of being forced into sex or nudity by a natural frce or even someone
5-i like to consentrate on the scenes between the farther and the mother where they have time when the kids away or things like that
6-i have little foot fetish as you may will notice from my stories so i like to make that fetish part of every scene or even outside the scene also some pee play or water sports as they call them but nothing disgusting like dirking the pee etc
7-yes you were right about scenes that cant be ture like father and son on dau this is hard to be ture even if i was into incest i mean the more the story close to real the more i like it
now let us see how many people should be there i am thinking about father 47 mom 43 dau 26 son 24 dau 23 son 21 dau 20 son 19 dau 18
how about our surviors like another family with them or indiviuals like other men or women
i waiting for more replies
thanks
1-The longer the story will be the more it will be good i mean i am aming at long story may be a novel but i dont think that is possible because my english is not that good but i would try if i get help
2-i am not into incest so i would prefer very much if the story was out of it but i guess you are right about the existanse of other people otherwise it may impossiblise to create scene
3-i like the idea of slowly going like explaing how they got there may be few sex scene before the have been strannded
4-i like the idea of lossing cloths with time due to natural casues and they cant replace them and i was thinking about that before i post the idea i also thinking that may be for example they found of eatsome kind of plants which aphrodisiac without realizing it and they cant help them for sometime i like ideas of being forced into sex or nudity by a natural frce or even someone
5-i like to consentrate on the scenes between the farther and the mother where they have time when the kids away or things like that
6-i have little foot fetish as you may will notice from my stories so i like to make that fetish part of every scene or even outside the scene also some pee play or water sports as they call them but nothing disgusting like dirking the pee etc
7-yes you were right about scenes that cant be ture like father and son on dau this is hard to be ture even if i was into incest i mean the more the story close to real the more i like it
now let us see how many people should be there i am thinking about father 47 mom 43 dau 26 son 24 dau 23 son 21 dau 20 son 19 dau 18
how about our surviors like another family with them or indiviuals like other men or women
i waiting for more replies
thanks
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Hey it would not be out of possibility to have a fishing trip with two neighbors families going out on the same boat.
Perhaps two really good friends take a vacation together. Both couples are good friends and they take an island vacation. Dragging along the teenaged children.
While on the island one of the adults has this bright idea to go on a fishing expedition so they all pile onto this good sized vessel and go out for the day. No need to bring additional clothing this is the caribean.
How you choose is up to you. You can keep the captain. I wouldn't as this only makes a person who is aware of where they are. Hard to be stranded if you know how to leave.
Let's suppose for a second the captain robbed a bank or something and ditched the real captain. He then tears out the radio and any other tracking device. Once at sea the family is un aware fishing, he places a small life boat in the water and takes the compass with him and sets off.
leaving the bigger boat with the people on it cruising along at a slow pace to no where.
When it is noticed the captain is gone hours later. They have no clue as to where they are. So they take over the boat and in an attempt to return they travel way out of the way. Also the boat is almost out of fuel by this point.
Spotting a small island they make their way to it. Then beach on some nice coral only a hundred feet from the beach.
They have fishing poles and some things like a knife what have you but are lost lost and though the island is a good mile by a mile it is basically deserted.
I would kill the thought of savages just me but it seems stupid.
Now you have some potential for fun, you can still have a mild incest thing going if you want or some wacky experiences.
You have 4 adults I would not give more characters than 5 children I would prefer 2,3,4 too many characters will reck the solitude of the story. People tend to be a bit more daring when it is just one on one multiple persons will keep the ligitimate society based rules in tact.
Just as mentioned earlier I could see a brother sister having sex if they were the only two on an island. But if there is other options persons not related I would think they would go for that option first.
Perhaps two really good friends take a vacation together. Both couples are good friends and they take an island vacation. Dragging along the teenaged children.
While on the island one of the adults has this bright idea to go on a fishing expedition so they all pile onto this good sized vessel and go out for the day. No need to bring additional clothing this is the caribean.
How you choose is up to you. You can keep the captain. I wouldn't as this only makes a person who is aware of where they are. Hard to be stranded if you know how to leave.
Let's suppose for a second the captain robbed a bank or something and ditched the real captain. He then tears out the radio and any other tracking device. Once at sea the family is un aware fishing, he places a small life boat in the water and takes the compass with him and sets off.
leaving the bigger boat with the people on it cruising along at a slow pace to no where.
When it is noticed the captain is gone hours later. They have no clue as to where they are. So they take over the boat and in an attempt to return they travel way out of the way. Also the boat is almost out of fuel by this point.
Spotting a small island they make their way to it. Then beach on some nice coral only a hundred feet from the beach.
They have fishing poles and some things like a knife what have you but are lost lost and though the island is a good mile by a mile it is basically deserted.
I would kill the thought of savages just me but it seems stupid.
Now you have some potential for fun, you can still have a mild incest thing going if you want or some wacky experiences.
You have 4 adults I would not give more characters than 5 children I would prefer 2,3,4 too many characters will reck the solitude of the story. People tend to be a bit more daring when it is just one on one multiple persons will keep the ligitimate society based rules in tact.
Just as mentioned earlier I could see a brother sister having sex if they were the only two on an island. But if there is other options persons not related I would think they would go for that option first.
hmm
2 friendly familes seems good idea but how about if the 2 familes were strangers on each other and the get to know each other there also i like the story to be set in old times before the electronic devices were made like 1700s or even in 1600s
i would prefer to start the story with normal sex scenes betwen the paretns like in any normal family may be few mastubation scenes for the kids
i guess cheating or infidilty between the parents will have to be condsiderable part of the story i dont like to any of moms to be slut types
and yes also (i know that may be in your area of intersts) but would like someone to give me idea in fetish department specialy in foot and peeing department
i would like to push away the idea of savages in the island i dont like it
my idea is that after being the island they get to know each other may be only the parents indluge in sex each with his partner at first then tehy start discovering the island and of course the loose their cloths while that for natural reasons and unable to replace them tehy become half or semi nude
also while that the kids should experince sexual pleasure first may be by mastubation then may be with each other without incest may be some lesbian scenes but no gay
how about moms with each other
the story is open and need new ideas
how about you like the other family ages to be
any other fetishs that you can think of
or any new ideas of being forced into an act of sexual kind without you will or even geting naked etc
2 friendly familes seems good idea but how about if the 2 familes were strangers on each other and the get to know each other there also i like the story to be set in old times before the electronic devices were made like 1700s or even in 1600s
i would prefer to start the story with normal sex scenes betwen the paretns like in any normal family may be few mastubation scenes for the kids
i guess cheating or infidilty between the parents will have to be condsiderable part of the story i dont like to any of moms to be slut types
and yes also (i know that may be in your area of intersts) but would like someone to give me idea in fetish department specialy in foot and peeing department
i would like to push away the idea of savages in the island i dont like it
my idea is that after being the island they get to know each other may be only the parents indluge in sex each with his partner at first then tehy start discovering the island and of course the loose their cloths while that for natural reasons and unable to replace them tehy become half or semi nude
also while that the kids should experince sexual pleasure first may be by mastubation then may be with each other without incest may be some lesbian scenes but no gay
how about moms with each other
the story is open and need new ideas
how about you like the other family ages to be
any other fetishs that you can think of
or any new ideas of being forced into an act of sexual kind without you will or even geting naked etc
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You could also go the sci-fi route with Lost in Space since it's just a futuristic Swiss Family Robinson. Then the robot and Dr. Smith could get in on the action. LOL
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kellycummings said:
this could also be an interesting part of a story ....
a brother and his sister are traveling in a spaceship. It is hit by a small comet, or something like that. The spaceship is still intact, but now it became incontrollable. Due to the comet, they are now heading into a new direction ... right towards a blackhole, or maybe a sun. Since the controlls are malfunctioning, they can't control the spaceship. They know that there is nothing that they can do .... they will crash into the sun. But due to the huge distance, this will still last like a few hours, or maybe even some days.
At Day 1, they still have hopes that they maybe could get away, but then, on the 2nd day it becomes obvious that they are doomed. Since they are getting closer and closer to the sun, the temperature in the spaceship is rising. Now they are only hours away from death. Suddenly, the guy looks at his sister and asks what she thinks about having sex before their certain death. At first, the sister doesn't realize what he means .... there are no other persons in the spaceship - so how could she have sex ? then she realizes it .... incest .... in the end, they have very hot sex .... extremly hot, when the spaceship crashes into the sun ...
When I think about it: this could also be set in the current time or in the past.
A small ship is hit by a storm. All the sails are ripped. They are far away from any island. To make it worse: In the storm, most of their water and food supply fell into the water. Now the people on the ship are facing certain death ... starving is a horrible death.
There is this 18 year old girl who is still a virgin .... but now, with death so imminent, she wants to feel if sex is really so good ... she talks to her mother and asks about permission to do it with her own father .... and mother finally gives in, because she knows that sex is great .... so the father fucks the daughter, while the mother watches. (maybe there is also a brother who fucks the mother .... and then also his sister).
Of course, no one really cares about pregnancy .... but finally, they are saved by another ship .... and then, they find out that the mother and daughter are pregnant ....
thanks NASCARaddicted but i dont want incest in my story and the idea of certin death ruins it i like to establish life on the island and get on with it
but we can do some infidilty scenes
still no one answered me about how we gonna add fetish scenes
also how we gonna force them on each other
other the idea of certin death
i mentioned the idea of plant that is aphrodisiac what else you have.?
but we can do some infidilty scenes
still no one answered me about how we gonna add fetish scenes
also how we gonna force them on each other
other the idea of certin death
i mentioned the idea of plant that is aphrodisiac what else you have.?
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Mike73 said:no i dont think so i like old fashion classic story
I use to have this friend that always said that named Mike. You ever live in Sutton?
No, I don't thinks so!
Back to my story:
so they land on the planet earth in the warm part of the globe on a deserted island.
As the theme song to Gilligan's island plays, in every reader's mind.
The wives for some reason pair up with the other spouse mabe one couple takes the kids off to find berries while the other couple go look for crabs and fish.
Meanwhile the female steps on a piece of coral or something and the other male looks at her foot carefully only a slight wound he sucks the wound clean and eventually sucks her toes. Whatever those fetish freaks do!
Mean while back at the ranch the other couple find them selves caught in thorns. That tear at thier clothes and skin shreading their clothes, but they need to help one another to excape the vines of thorns that now souround them clung together.
The youth well who knows kids just have sex to have sex
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