Road tripping

[juicygirl]

I thought, after I saw what sixth did, that I should ask for a little help on Road Tripping. Its the story of a not so happy repressed girl who is really discovering herself. In the introduction the idea is that she is leaving her old identity behind (I know that's obvious, its just the main example I have so far). That's the whole point of stripping herself down the way she does. Anyway, its really for anyone who has gone a little crazy at sometime in there life and been a little stupid the way he was.

So if you guys have any suggestions I would be happy to hear them. The other story I started is basically intended to sub/dom pornography -- which is certainly fine. On this story I want to move past that to erotica. It can be cold, dark, happy or light. I would love non-sexual threads too. For me anyway, the whole point is to get more out of the sexuality of the story than you often do in more strictly pornographic stories.

So if anyone has some good ideas, or wants to add anything to it, let me know. I need help!

 

[LauraSG]

I'm interested in adding...give me a few days and I might be able to come up with something good

 

[juicygirl]

I know you will sweetie.


Hugs and kisses

 

[juicygirl]

I am also interested in any suggestions, threads, etc. for Frat Slut. I have'nt quite figured out how Molly is going to get out of her mess, and my she has been very messy. So please let me know if you have any questions threads, or thread ideas for me.
I'm a little desperate.

 

[juicygirl]

Sorry, a viewer of this page asked where these stories are. If you don't know they are at chyoo.com. Frat Slut is under mind control. Road Tripping is under erotic couplings.

 

[LauraSG]

Luckily I had already looked up your stories so I was informed

 

[juicygirl]

Well, I figured you knew that Laura. We have some mutual thread I believe. Its just for people, like one PM'er I discussed this with, who don't know. I think that maybe lit and chyoo people don't necessarily know the other as well as they might. Its the only reason that I think would explain why I would get asked on this forum. Maybe it was just a very new person. Anyway, come one come all. If you add to any of my stories, or just want to say mean things to me, this is the thread for you.

 

[michaelmt1]

I have just submitted a thread on the above story. The one I added to though is a classic example of a thread that ended way too early for my liking. The thread ended with her getting into the car .....what deos she do.... well what else can she do she has to stay in the car. there is no clear option so i have tried simply to complete that thread and give her and the writers an option to explore...

I have a funny feeling she might decide to be a bit of a red neck for a while lets see where luck will take her.

Hope the thread meets your approval.

Mike

 

[juicygirl]

Hey Michael,

I like the general drift of the thread. I don't think you need to make as mucy fun of his intelligence though. Sorry, just a prejudice for backwoods folks. I suspect that incest survivors like Joe might not be as nice and healthy as they appear. I guess I think he would be more pervy. Maybe not. Feel free to respond if you think I'm full of crap. Just generally speaking, Yasmina would be unlikely to be the sexual aggressor for the first couple of times. She's still a virgin, and doesn't quite know how to deal with her virgin self -- yeah, she is looking to lose it, but she isn't likely to just jump every Joe who comes around.

I can accept it now, and make changes. Or, you could make the changes. I don't want necessarily to mess with your work, though I will correct obvious errors that I catch. However, I won't materially change what you send in unless you tell me that that's fine. I like the thread generally, though the baseball metaphor threw me for a little loop for just one second. Anyway, let me know what you want me to do via Pm, and I will make it happen. I am fine with however you want to deal with it, and thank you for the thread. Keep it up.

You know, I hope, that you can still edit and add to your thread, until I accept it.

 

[juicygirl]

Cool thread Michael!


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