Rich cuckquean humiliation story

[Alexandra80]

A sort of class war and generation war scenario.

So, the main character of the story is a divorced upper class lady in her mid-thirties who dates a man of her age and plans to marry him. She's still good looking MILF type and while no longer perfect, she's good at hiding her flaws with the classy elegant clothes, expensive jewelry and stylishly applied make-up.

She's also a snooty domineering ice queen type and she particularly despises poor people and those who are born into lower background. And while she's definitely not frigid, she's rather prudish about sex.

Everything goes well before her fiance stumbles upon a young girl who works as a car washer, janitor or any other menial worker. The girl is everything the rich lady hates, she's youthful and pretty, but trashy, foul-mouthed and she disrespects her "betters".

The girl is successful at seducing the main character's fiance. The wealthy lady tries to fend her from her man, first persuading her, then trying to buy her off, and finally threatens her with "problems", only to receive a humiliating beating. Then she schemes to put her adversary in jail but caught red-handed and the younger girl gives her a choice, either to be a submissive cuckquean or be sent to jail herself. She very reluctantly submits to the blackmailer, still hoping to win back her fiance.

Then the older woman is forced to watch her man and this girl making love to each other in various places, including her own home. There are a lot of other degrading stuff too: she's forced to strip not only in front the couple but semi-publicly too, wash away her make up, put on cheap slutty or ugly clothes. Of course she must also please the younger woman and maybe even some of her relatives and friends sexually.

While she's very reluctant to all that, at some point she finds that she actually sexually aroused at her predicament. That is especially humiliating for the older woman.

I don't know if someone finds this scenario interesting to the point of writing a full-fledged story, but here it is. Would be nice to read your thoughts and suggestions anyway.

 

[Sean Renaud]

It's been a long time since I've said this but damn I like this story idea pretty much from top to bottom. I think the ONE thing that I have a hard time wrapping my head around is the threat of jail but I think that it's easy enough to factor in that people might believe threats that aren't real. I like it and if I can clear up some time in my schedule I might take a crack at this.

 

[Alexandra80]

I think the ONE thing that I have a hard time wrapping my head around is the threat of jail but I think that it's easy enough to factor in that people might believe threats that aren't real.

I thought about the protagonist buying off the police officer who should frame the girl by planting drugs into her bag. But the girl's friend who works at the police station accidentally overhears this conversation and warns her in advance. Then the policeman caught red handed and the conspiracy now may be revealed.

Maybe too complicated but plausible.

 

[Sean Renaud]

That strikes me as implausible without setting some of it up in advance. It require three "Random" things. The protaganist having a cop friend she thought she could bribe. (This can be fixed by her family being sufficiently far up the food chain that she thought she could buy any cop or hell wouldn't really have to bother but this tangles a later bit.) Two that this roughian has a friend on the force. Most people in those positions don't associate. (That's not impossible of course. They could be childhood chums, ex's, hell she could be a Criminal Informant. But if the Protaganist is far enough up the food chain this could hurt the cop friend. And finally that he/she's in a position to hear something randomly discussed in enough detail to work.

All of which makes it highly implausible but far from impossible.

I think the easier fix has the Protaganist plant the drugs herself, the girl finds them almost immediately either because she's smart enough to see this move coming or just happens to spill her purse/bag/whatever. Cops arrive, they search the girl's stuff find nothing, they take her in anyway and do all the tests she comes back clean. She then tells the Pro she knows the guy who sold the drugs and he'll testify. She's bluffing but most blackmail stories start with something that might as well be a bluff.

eithe rway even the original idea would mostly flow and I REALLY like the over all set up. Tis brilliant.

 

[Alexandra80]

Two that this roughian has a friend on the force. Most people in those positions don't associate.

Her friend might be a cleaner at the police station.

This can be fixed by her family being sufficiently far up the food chain that she thought she could buy any cop

I think, yes, she is and maybe her lawyer who knows local police well points her to a particular crooked cop.

I think the easier fix has the Protaganist plant the drugs herself, the girl finds them almost immediately either because she's smart enough to see this move coming or just happens to spill her purse/bag/whatever.

I see the protagonist is too "kid glove" type to get her own hands dirty, and being privileged and rich, she's just not street smart to do this task

 

[Alexandra80]

eithe rway even the original idea would mostly flow and I REALLY like the over all set up. Tis brilliant.

Thank you for the kind words.

 

[Hypoxia]

All of which makes it highly implausible but far from impossible.

From the laws of big numbers: Any specific event is vanishingly unlikely but stuff happens anyway. In fiction, we only need make an event plausible within the story context. She just happens to have the right friends. His cock just happens to slip into Mom's / Aunty's / Sis's vagina. They just happen to be on the back porch when nobody is watching. Et cetera. Stuff happens. Nothing is determined.

 

[Sean Renaud]

From the laws of big numbers: Any specific event is vanishingly unlikely but stuff happens anyway. In fiction, we only need make an event plausible within the story context. She just happens to have the right friends. His cock just happens to slip into Mom's / Aunty's / Sis's vagina. They just happen to be on the back porch when nobody is watching. Et cetera. Stuff happens. Nothing is determined.

Well as I've stated many times. Reality can be random, fiction must make sense. So in reality whatever happens happens because it happens. No more reason than that. You bring up the important part though, it must be plausible within the story context. A tiny line early on in the story with the ruffian holding on to a pair of cuffs she got from her friend, ex, brother et cetera establishes that this person exists early on. Problem solved.

By contrast SEAL Team 6 cannot drop in to take out the terrorist cell you didn't know was in a hidden basement beneath your house. Because riots.

 

[MissManners78]

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[Hypoxia]

I just re-read the OP and find the concept intriguing. Points that come to mind:

* The fiancé Fred must be high enough on the food chain that ice queen Irina can't buy him off -- threatening their relationship doesn't imperil his net worth. He doesn't need her money. Thus he is free to act as he wishes whether Irina likes it or not.

* The young girl is obviously a street-smart prole but even though she's a menial worker she's not ignorant -- listens to NPR and strategic audiobooks while she works, reads all the getting-ahead material she can find, etc. She targeted Fred at first sight.

* Cucks / wittols / subs stereotypically fit a personality type: a commanding person in public life who *needs* to be dominated and humiliated in private. Irina's subconscious drives her into the cuckqueen role, drives her to failed attempts at escape -- like the munged frame-up -- drives her to being used.

* I have no trouble with the jail threat. It's easily written-in.

* I like the escalation: from Irina as a passive observer of the lovers, to servicing all their friends and families. Irina loves it too but won't admit that. The more extreme her subjugation, the better. She develops a taste for anus-licking, for sure.

Would I write it? Not soon, and it would push my envelope. Maybe next year...

 

[loquere]

It's been a long time since I've said this but damn I like this story idea pretty much from top to bottom. I think the ONE thing that I have a hard time wrapping my head around is the threat of jail but I think that it's easy enough to factor in that people might believe threats that aren't real. I like it and if I can clear up some time in my schedule I might take a crack at this.

What I got from it, is the older lady did something like open up an illegal wire-tap on the younger lady to find evidence of illegality. She finds evidence, but the younger lady knowing the wire tap is illegal tells her I own you now.

 

[loquere]

I like the story as well.

 

[geronimo_appleby]

stupid question maybe, but...

why does the fiance go along with it? was he with the lady solely because of her money/status?

 

[Hypoxia]

stupid question maybe, but...

why does the fiance go along with it? was he with the lady solely because of her money/status?

For money, and status, and pussy -- and most important, because the author said so. The fiancé Fred is realistic, almost princely, and recognizes that a visible consort (the ice queen) need not interfere with his fun. It's a class thing.

 

[geronimo_appleby]

For money, and status, and pussy -- and most important, because the author said so. The fiancé Fred is realistic, almost princely, and recognizes that a visible consort (the ice queen) need not interfere with his fun. It's a class thing.

he's enthralled by the prole's debased attitudes, shocked because she's so wrong at such a tender age?

 

[Hypoxia]

he's enthralled by the prole's debased attitudes, shocked because she's so wrong at such a tender age?

No, he just knows a good piece of ass when he sees it. She's agreeable and eager and doesn't mind the sugar daddy bit at all. They're only using each other and they know it but they could have a long run. He's less shocked than amused and pleased. Maybe she brings in friends to join the fun. He's set to marry a society maven while discreetly fucking the prole and her buddies. Life is good.

 

[geronimo_appleby]

No, he just knows a good piece of ass when he sees it. She's agreeable and eager and doesn't mind the sugar daddy bit at all. They're only using each other and they know it but they could have a long run. He's less shocked than amused and pleased. Maybe she brings in friends to join the fun. He's set to marry a society maven while discreetly fucking the prole and her buddies. Life is good.

i see the girl as Lolly Badcock (sewer-mouthed Brit pornstar).