Review my story

[cubbiefan84]

This is my first Chyoo story. I just wanted to try it out so I went for a simple teacher/student scenario. I tried to keep it realistic (she's more hesitant, as opposed to throwing herself at him), but let me know what you think.

http://www.chyoo.com/index.php/main.story.cover/5822

Comments appreciated!

 

[Torg]

This is my first Chyoo story. I just wanted to try it out so I went for a simple teacher/student scenario. I tried to keep it realistic (she's more hesitant, as opposed to throwing herself at him), but let me know what you think.

http://www.chyoo.com/index.php/main.story.cover/5822

Comments appreciated!

I like that many threads end unsuccessfully. This is much more about how to woo this teacher than everything leads to sex.