Euphony
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That sounded interesting. I read it, and it is interesting.I wrote a story, Thorvik Kabot, based on old sword & sorcery fantasy (esp. John Norman's GOR novels) about a swaggering, misogynistic barbarian who hunts succubi, but always winds up getting captured and sexually dominated and humiliated by them instead.
So far, I've only written one, but have lots of ideas for more, just not the time to flesh them out.
I hope that didn't seem too harsh. I just followed you, and I'll read future installments. I just think that if you post here, you probably want to improve your writing.Still holding the Acolyte by her throat with one hand, Thorvik used his other hand to thrust two fingers
into her pussy and one into her asshole ...
I have a WIP with this exact premise. Married man takes a drug that has a side effect of enlarging his penis. Wife is all excited at first, but when the effect manifests, she can't handle his size.A man has a huge penis. He can never have satisfying sex, because his dick is so big it can't fit into any woman's mouth or vagina or anus without causing discomfort. He's too normal a person to be able to enjoy sex if his partner is not enjoying it, too.
Finally, he gets a custom-made vibrating sleeve and that's the happy ending.
-Rocco
That sounded interesting. I read it, and it is interesting.
Buuut ( you could hear that coming, right?) ...
I suggest you get an editor. There are volunteers you can find on your "My Home" page. It makes it hard to read when you have formatting problems like:
I hope that didn't seem too harsh. I just followed you, and I'll read future installments. I just think that if you post here, you probably want to improve your writing.
-Eddie